Some people believe that scientific discoveries have given us a much better understanding of the world around us. Others believe that science has revealed to us that the world is infinitely more complex than we ever realized.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented.
Some people support the opinion that scientific discoveries have provided us a much better realization of the globe around us. On the other hand, it could be argued that science has revealed that the world is infinitely more convoluted than we ever understood. In the final analysis, I tend to hold the center ground with regard to the subject at hand. To my way of thinking, the consequences of scientific advancements have been twofold- that is helping humans with better understanding the universe as well as revealing its infinite complexities. The following essay will outline my take on the subject at hand.
To begin with, it seems to me that it has been through a great deal of scientific discoveries that human beings have been capable of obtaining a better understanding of the world. In other words, such developments have paved the way
for working out some of the most complicated scientific concepts. By way of illustration, the day when Neil Armstrong became the first man ever stepping on the Moon the idea of delving more into the space became much more
feasible due to the fact that such scientific achievement made it possible for human to get a better realization of the globe and the manner in which it works. If the American astronaut had not landed on the Moon on that day, human's
longing for achieving a better sense of the world might not have been satisfied. In short, the first part of the statement just correctly conveys one of the fundamental objectives of making scientific discoveries, which is familiarizing humans
with more secrets of the universe.
Having made these points, however, in my view, science and technology have also revealed us the fact that the world we are living in is extremely complex. Every year scientists and scholars make impressive scientific achievements with the
aim of totally answering one of the mysteries the globe. Yet when they meet the conclusion, they may encounter another new problem or unanswered scientific question while solving their previous scientific qualms. As I see,
this is one of the inherent aspects of making scientific discoveries that one can answer his/her previously raised questions while facing the new ones with their unique complexities. Considering a vast number of NASA's yearly
missions into the space, one might think that most, if not all, of the space's questions should have been addressed and answered. But when we hear of NASA's ambitious future projects, we can easily come to the conclusion that
human beings are far away from knowing anything about the world, and that for every scientific discovery that has been made there have been raised another scientific problem waiting to be dealt with.
On balance, I feel that it is one of the undeniable characteristics of scientific and technological discoveries through which one can gain a much more facilitated understanding of the world, yet encountering other convoluted and ambiguous aspects of the globe which require to be scientifically handled.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...rovided us a much better realization of the globe around us. On the other hand, it could be argued ...
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...ressive scientific achievements with the aim of totally answering one of the myst...
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...ir previous scientific qualms. As I see, this is one of the inherent aspects of m...
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...onsidering a vast number of NASAs yearly missions into the space, one might think...
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...e can easily come to the conclusion that human beings are far away from knowing a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, so, well, while, i feel, in short, as well as, in my view, in other words, to begin with, with regard to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 22.0 11.3162921348 194% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 33.0505617978 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 67.0 58.6224719101 114% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2535.0 2235.4752809 113% => OK
No of words: 495.0 442.535393258 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12121212121 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71684168287 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89989005136 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 247.0 215.323595506 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.49898989899 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 773.1 704.065955056 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 12.0 4.38483146067 274% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 23.0359550562 126% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.1353919649 60.3974514979 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.117647059 118.986275619 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.1176470588 23.4991977007 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.35294117647 5.21951772744 179% => OK
Paragraphs: 12.0 4.97078651685 241% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.326125591845 0.243740707755 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111616631178 0.0831039109588 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107028832379 0.0758088955206 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116299705571 0.150359130593 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0913482553257 0.0667264976115 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 14.1392134831 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 48.8420337079 86% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 12.1743820225 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.01 12.1639044944 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 100.480337079 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 11.2143820225 121% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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