Some people believe that scientific discoveries have given us a much better understanding of the world around us. Others believe that science has revealed to us that the world is infinitely more complex than we ever realized.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented.
Scientific discoveries have enabled us to understand many phenomena which were, unknown prior to humankind. Such discoveries have changed the general perspective of people towards natural things and things that can be achieved in the near future. So, i feel that scientific discoveries have given us a much better understanding of the world around us. The following points will help in establishing my position.
From primodial times we have had the alacrity to know the reason behind everything and all phenomena that occur around us, to satisfy this urge humans have gone to great extend to find reasons. This has led to scientific discovereies that have changed and challenged the traditional beleives. For instance, the debate over flat earth versus sphere earth theory is one traditional belief that was corrected and led to the finding that Earth is a sphere revolving around the sun. This also helped in clearing the misconception that one would fall off the surface if he traveled to the edges. So, literallty scientific discoveries have given us a better undertsanding of the world or the planet we live on. Many such discoveries like gravity, wind rotation patterns, meterological and weather prediciton stations and patterns have let us know about all that happens around us.
Getting a better understanding leads to even more discoveries and even clear outlook of the world. Creating a virtuous cycle of knowledge, thought and theory. For example, the discovery of magnifying glass to observe small particles gave the urge to further magnify the sample. Which lead to creation on simple microscope and giving further information about simpe cells and materials. This gave idea of creation of more complex microscopes like TEMs and SEMs which can now be used to study nanoparticles. These particles can then be used for understanding micro and nano scale effects which and invisible to naked eye. Creating this virtuous cycle for better understading can only be attributed to sicentific discoveries which led to creation and urge for knowing even more.
The world around us can is vast and very difficult to study altogetherm but as technological researches advance, the closer we come to each other and the better understadning we have of different parts of the world. Exposing us to different cultures and dialects and many other things unknown earlier. The cultutral geospace created virtually by the advancing research in scientifc fields, is nothing but amazing, which leaves one awstruck. How he can sit at home and enjoy things on the anitpole to his location. This is all thanks to advancements in technological reseraches. This has led to not only better scientific understanding of the world but also better cultuaral and social understadning.
One may argue that this has also created more confusion and made scientific understading of prior know facts more complex, but this is not completely true. Only these complex idea give one the vigor to research further and find solutions to eariler enigmatic problems. As, the development to nano scale prior unknown was developed, now further development is taking place to scale even smaller, which can have great results and applications in all fields. So, it is important one undertsands how important is the role of scientitifc discoveries for development and understadning of our world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, may, so, then, for example, for instance, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 29.0 14.8657303371 195% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.3162921348 141% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 33.0505617978 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 66.0 58.6224719101 113% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2831.0 2235.4752809 127% => OK
No of words: 540.0 442.535393258 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24259259259 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.82057051367 4.55969084622 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94093373282 2.79657885939 105% => OK
Unique words: 261.0 215.323595506 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.483333333333 0.4932671777 98% => OK
syllable_count: 873.9 704.065955056 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.2370786517 133% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.5084285629 60.3974514979 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.851851852 118.986275619 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 23.4991977007 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.55555555556 5.21951772744 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 10.2758426966 165% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.326260507518 0.243740707755 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0943592242116 0.0831039109588 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113796722251 0.0758088955206 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200899241022 0.150359130593 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.093096048169 0.0667264976115 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 14.1392134831 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.1639044944 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 127.0 100.480337079 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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