Some people believe that teaching morality should be the foundation of education. Others believe that teaching a foundation of logical reasoning would do more to produce a moral society.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented above.
The debate between rationality and morality is not a very uncommon one. Some hold the belief that an individual's moral values help in shaping his/her personality/characteristic. Whereas others are of the opinion that the way an individual can methodologically break down problems/situations further educates him and shapes up his/her personality. however, if the discussion is about whether building blocks of the education system should be based on morality/logical reasoning would be very debatable and an interesting one. I strongly agree with the opinion,morality should be the building block of our foundation of education. The two examples stated below that would further help in supporting the thesis.
Considering the example of the functioning of big organizations, higher management would lead the company better if they have certain unsaid code of conduct to follow. Mark Zuckerberg in 2018 when presented in front of the council to defend facebook's data security policies, could defend himself and his own staff because of the ethical moralities followed by each person in the organization. staff working for companies where the data privacy policy is extremely high should follow and maintain a high level of ethical/moral values the seeds of which can be sown during school. if a person follows a pragmatic approach then data of all clients of facebook should be leaked in order for the company to make a profit based on predictive analysis of the most talked-about the application, product, etc.
Second example would be of an employee working in a bank as a data engineer. A lot of times data engineers are exposed to client databases that contain highly confidential information of the client's bank account details, credit card details, etc. however, a person in such a scenario needs to have strong moral values to not store such information in personal drives and spaces. bank jobs especially test candidates on ethical aptitude during interviews and give it more weight as compared to the skills a candidate possesses.
In conclusion, we can say that a person at any stage of life can be taught the logical and pragmatic approach of thinking or of various other things in life but moral values cannot be inculcated overnight. it is a deep understanding of what is wrong and what is right, not as assumed by society but by an individual's subconscious mind. Hence it can also be concluded that the education system should include more moral awakening subjects in their course structure.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, second, so, then, whereas, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 33.0505617978 64% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 58.6224719101 96% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2106.0 2235.4752809 94% => OK
No of words: 405.0 442.535393258 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48604634366 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.22076595445 2.79657885939 115% => OK
Unique words: 231.0 215.323595506 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57037037037 0.4932671777 116% => OK
syllable_count: 665.1 704.065955056 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.594160905 60.3974514979 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.882352941 118.986275619 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8235294118 23.4991977007 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.17647058824 5.21951772744 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188969576815 0.243740707755 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0590148085628 0.0831039109588 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0482866292348 0.0758088955206 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107416203186 0.150359130593 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0436534463675 0.0667264976115 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 14.1392134831 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 48.8420337079 99% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.1639044944 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.38706741573 109% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 100.480337079 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.5 Out of 6
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