Technology, while apparently aimed to simplify our lives, only makes our lives more complicated.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Technology has changed the way human beings experience the world around them and proponents of technological advancement have credit technology with making this experience more favourable than that of our ancestors. However, there are many aspects of transitions brought into our lives by technology which have made our ways of lives more complicated and negated the perceived benefits, in reality.
Any strong proponents of technology in our day-to-day lives, will put forward the strongest logic in favour of technology that it has made many works faster and less time-consuming than that of pre-technology era. At first, one might be convinced with this argument and confounded to contend it. However, a critical and sharp observer of our technology driven daily lives will assert that the time saved by technology has actually been devoured by itself through various forms of distractions.
For example, one might open YouTube to watch some videos to learn a subject faster. However, he or she will get distracted by other entertainment videos also available in the same platform and might get ended with wasting hours there without learning a single new topic.
Similar arguments can also strongly question the increased connectivity achieved through the uses of technology. An irony of this type of virtual technologies like the use of social media is that one might be wary of someone thousands mile away, yet totally oblivious of near and dear ones present nearby. In various social researches, it has been found that human beings have become less social and less communicating towards fellow humans with the increased use of connectivity technologies like social media.
Technology and its uses may have brought into many positive changes in our lives but related debilitating effects on human actions and interactions have made human lives more complicated than that of earlier generations of human species on this earth.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, however, may, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 19.5258426966 31% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 33.0505617978 76% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 58.6224719101 82% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1638.0 2235.4752809 73% => OK
No of words: 306.0 442.535393258 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35294117647 5.05705443957 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85507223749 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 215.323595506 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575163398693 0.4932671777 117% => OK
syllable_count: 514.8 704.065955056 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.2370786517 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 23.0359550562 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.9128467188 60.3974514979 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.909090909 118.986275619 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8181818182 23.4991977007 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.18181818182 5.21951772744 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108451677204 0.243740707755 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0459890723018 0.0831039109588 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0444314538973 0.0758088955206 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0652602582155 0.150359130593 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0468152169686 0.0667264976115 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 14.1392134831 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 48.8420337079 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 12.1743820225 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 12.1639044944 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.38706741573 112% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 100.480337079 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 11.8971910112 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.2143820225 114% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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