Technology, while apparently aimed to simplify our lives, only makes our lives more complicated.

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Technology, while apparently aimed to simplify our lives, only makes our lives more complicated.

Advancemnets in technology have a way lot of implications that not only have helped us positively in many ways but has made our life much simpler and less monotonous.

Today, every thing is at our finger tip. Name a service, you have a technological solution and advantage of it that makes it simpler and more efficient. One good example is the invention of a smartphone that has made many mundane activities a cakewalk. One prominent example is the food deliver service. Many over the top food delivery partners have simplified our most basic amenity i.e., the requirement of palatable and delicious food to door steps anytime and anywhere for anybody. Not only basic services such as food, but the most essential ones such as the medicines are also delivered these days which is great bane of the advancement of the technology.

Much of the technological improvement is quite apparent these days in the field of medicine and surgical procedures which has made the process hasselfree from the human error which have unbounded complication on anyone's life. With the advancement stepping into the machines that can perform the surgery or any operations without the human intervention is genious and the best example which portrays how our lives can be made more simpler and quite efficient. Prediction of the disease and timely treatment with the help of predicted models has saved many human lives.

One cannot just outweigh the dominance of the technology intervention in the field of supply chain and management. Gone are the days where one had to depend on the shipment guy and wait for hours or even days for any goods to be either shipped or to be procured. Nowadays everything is recorded and managed using the tools that help for tracking any activity invloved where one cannot just escape duties and which indirectly makes customers life way simple and happy.

Though the advancement in technology has improved our lives to a great extent, at times one has to concede that people have become much dependent on it which has languished their analytical and decisional abilities. At times things may not workout, this might result in complexities due to multiple dependicies on technogy at various multitudes.

At the end of the day, human being want peace and happiness in his wife without any complications. This is ensured without any doubt by the inventions and the advancements in technology in one's valuable life.

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Average: 6.6 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 426, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'simpler' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: simpler
...hich portrays how our lives can be made more simpler and quite efficient. Prediction of the ...
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Line 7, column 121, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
...ld of supply chain and management. Gone are the days where one had to depend on the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, as to, such as, to a great extent

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 14.8657303371 148% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 33.0505617978 70% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 58.6224719101 80% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 12.9106741573 116% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2038.0 2235.4752809 91% => OK
No of words: 404.0 442.535393258 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04455445545 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48327461151 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78697483 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 215.323595506 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527227722772 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 666.9 704.065955056 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.4529384183 60.3974514979 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.882352941 118.986275619 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7647058824 23.4991977007 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.35294117647 5.21951772744 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141591935522 0.243740707755 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0426078533076 0.0831039109588 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0428359796082 0.0758088955206 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0672055034258 0.150359130593 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0475515761478 0.0667264976115 71% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 14.1392134831 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 48.8420337079 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 12.1743820225 110% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.1639044944 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.38706741573 106% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 100.480337079 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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