Those who see their ideas through, regardless of doubts or criticism others may express, are the ones who tend to leave a lasting legacy.
New ideas bring innovation in the world. It is true in any feild. Most of the time new ideas will face doubts or criticism, by experts or fellow members or common people. Every new idea talk about some change in the process or work flow and will change the way of things happenig right now. Diversity is the beauty of the nature. We all are different and everybody doesn't have ability to think and understand other persons' ideas. In this situation, when new ideas doesn't get acceptance, and but still innovative people see through it, are the one who have abilty to leave a lasting legacy and bring change in the world.
In 2012, U.S president Brack Obama presented a bill to make medical insurance necessary for everybody. According to his proposal, everybody who is living in US has to have medical insurance. It was a big step for country, which require millions of dollers from government. For which, president faced alot of criticism and doubts from senete members, and opposition party, but he decided not to change his mind about this bill, and finally he won despite of the all the opposition and he passed Obama care bill, which provided affordable care to twenty million people. People remember him for his great work to pass this bill.
Now days, India president Narendra Modi is in news, for passing a bill to stop 500 and 1000 rupee bills. His purpose is bring all the in the light who have black money or who have untaxed money. This has created a big tumult in the country. This decision is facing alot of criticism, due inconvenience faced by the citizens of the country. Regardless what people say he continue to work on decision and uncovering black money owners, which is making him famous leader worldwide.
Presented argument has other side also. There are some ideas which can bring destruction or are not good for human well being. Pursuing these ideas despite of criticism can face great opposition can make someone criminal instead of leaving lasting legacy.
In conclusion, People who can bring their ideas to reality regardless of doubts and criticism leave a lasting legacy.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, so, still, well, as to, in conclusion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 33.0505617978 67% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 58.6224719101 73% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1752.0 2235.4752809 78% => OK
No of words: 363.0 442.535393258 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82644628099 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42564760177 2.79657885939 87% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 215.323595506 89% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526170798898 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 548.1 704.065955056 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.740449438202 135% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.1930090634 60.3974514979 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.4285714286 118.986275619 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2857142857 23.4991977007 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.47619047619 5.21951772744 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229474000361 0.243740707755 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0637650186055 0.0831039109588 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101146703747 0.0758088955206 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171544936724 0.150359130593 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.140472948472 0.0667264976115 211% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 14.1392134831 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 48.8420337079 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 12.1743820225 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 12.1639044944 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 100.480337079 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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