True success can be measured primarily in terms of the goals one sets for oneself.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
True success is the measure of the actions that we take in the course of the activities. These activities can we can have varied in duration; a day short or a month long. I agree with the author's idea that true success can be measured by the completion of goals we promise our self, but with some reservations.
Goals are the attribute that defined the morality of the life. When I joined college, I was not interested in studying the course I opted but due to the late admission, circumstances force upon me to select Industrial Engineering. For my freshmen year, I failed in most of the classes but granted conditional promotion for the next year. Consequently, my parents have to visit to the dean and sign a affidavit regarding the promise that I will study hard to maintain GPA 6.5 out of 10 else I will be expelled. Noticing my parents’ misery and disappointment I decided to make a goal of scoring GPA 7/10 in my upcoming semester. Initially I did not like the subject but after attending in the class and then later self-studying in the library helped me to cope up with the syllabus. I progressed in completing assignments timely and kept the 85 percent attendance in whole semester. Subsequently, I scored 7.89/10 GPA in the the final exams of my semester, conquering the goal that i made in the starting of the semester. I was content with my accomplishment regarding which I promised myself in the beginning. Therefore, my success can be defined as the the goal i set which I was able to conquer in the given duration.
There is the another example which prove the said claim. while I was in high school, I made a goal of learning the swimming and participate in the inter school competition. I had no knowledge about the sports and did not had any resources near my home to learn it as live in downtown to the city. The school swimming pool was the only way to learn but I do not have enough fund to hire a coach. Thereafter, I decided to finance my coaching by myself and took a job in the nearby Mc Donald which paid me enough to pay for 3-month fee for coaching. I worked after school hours for 3 hours and came back to learn the basics of swimming. At first, it feels like giving up as people around me were intimidating professionals whereas I on the other hand was the only beginner but I gathered enough strength and learned my way to be a professional swimmer. After 3 months of my paid coaching, I practiced for 10 more months on my own and signed up for inter school competition. During which, even though I was relatively amateur in comparison to the other candidates I performed well enough to receive 5th rank in my age group out of 20 swimmers. Hence, that accomplishment provided enough motivation to keep continuing in swimming later. Therefore, Success is the sum of the decisions we take and the execution of those decision.
It is also true that with my accomplishment, my parents and friends were also happy with my performance which ultimately gave me courage and motivation to go forward to achieve other things in my life. I was also able to motivate my friends to deal with their own life goals. So it can be said that feedback of one's success can also instigate other in achieving their goals.
In conclusion, due to the personal examples states above it can be said that success is measured in terms of the goal we achieve and later motivate others in being the best version of themselves.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'authors'' or 'author's'?
Suggestion: authors'; author's
...short or a month long. I agree with the authors idea that true success can be measured ...
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...ents have to visit to the dean and sign a affidavit regarding the promise that I ...
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.... Subsequently, I scored 7.89/10 GPA in the the final exams of my semester, conquering ...
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.... Subsequently, I scored 7.89/10 GPA in the the final exams of my semester, conquering ...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
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...f my semester, conquering the goal that i made in the starting of the semester. I...
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...Therefore, my success can be defined as the the goal i set which I was able to conquer ...
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...Therefore, my success can be defined as the the goal i set which I was able to conquer ...
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... able to conquer in the given duration. There is the another example which prove...
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...her example which prove the said claim. while I was in high school, I made a goal of ...
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...earning the swimming and participate in the inter school competition. I had no knowledge ...
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... knowledge about the sports and did not had any resources near my home to learn it ...
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...y resources near my home to learn it as live in downtown to the city. The school swi...
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...als. So it can be said that feedback of ones success can also instigate other in ach...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, hence, if, regarding, so, then, therefore, well, whereas, while, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 14.8657303371 141% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.3162921348 141% => OK
Pronoun: 78.0 33.0505617978 236% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 95.0 58.6224719101 162% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2829.0 2235.4752809 127% => OK
No of words: 619.0 442.535393258 140% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.57027463651 5.05705443957 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.98795655647 4.55969084622 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82491211505 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 295.0 215.323595506 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.476575121163 0.4932671777 97% => OK
syllable_count: 884.7 704.065955056 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 19.0 6.24550561798 304% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.2370786517 138% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.7813184501 60.3974514979 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.035714286 118.986275619 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1071428571 23.4991977007 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.60714285714 5.21951772744 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 7.80617977528 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1810456422 0.243740707755 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0551332835773 0.0831039109588 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0519650789312 0.0758088955206 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119991923717 0.150359130593 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0348374440252 0.0667264976115 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 14.1392134831 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 48.8420337079 135% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 12.1639044944 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 126.0 100.480337079 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.