Undergraduate students majoring in Business or in the Sciences should not be required to take any courses in the Humanities since those courses won’t benefit their future careers.
While some people tend to think that college students majoring in Business or in the Sciences have to foucus on their major, and do not study other courses in the humanities which may not benefit their careers, others seem to disagree with it. In my opinion, I believe that studying lots of diverse courses for students is better, and the following discussion reveals my stand and reasoning.
To begin with, students have to attend different courses so that they can deal with lots of complicate situation. To be specific, if one student who just foucus on his major, he may not have an ability to face people. For example, my friend, Alex, majoring in Computer Science with me in the college. He did not like to study other courses bacause he thought that other courses were not benefit to him. When we graduated from college, no company wanted him. After he asked to lots of managers of different compaines, he realized that he cannot find the job due to his personality. They thought he did not know how to face the people. Thus, I think that students have to take different courses.
Moreover, studying other courses can relieve our stress. When we focus on on major, we may have lots of stress beacuse we probably make lots of efforts to deal with it. Studying different courses is a good way that we can meet lots of different people, and see the different view from them. Therefore, I think having different courses can be benefit to us.
True, some people might say that if college students majoring in Business or in the Sciences study lots of different courses, it may not have any benefit when they work in the company. They should not watse their time to study other courses. However, this belief fools to consider the fact that if they take some couses in the humanities or in the society, they can learn lots of skill of facing people. They have to deal with a lot of people or resolve lots of problem when they work in the company. That is to say, studying courses in the humanities can benefit them. Therefore, it is hard to convince people to of this idea.
To sum up, with the reasons mentioned above, I think that college students majoring in Business or in the Sciences have to gain different knowledge in the different courses. There seems to be some validity to other points of view. However, I still believe that the reasons of my opinion are stronger.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 388, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'benefited', 'benefitted'.
Suggestion: benefited; benefitted
... he thought that other courses were not benefit to him. When we graduated from college,...
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Line 9, column 72, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: on
...s can relieve our stress. When we focus on on major, we may have lots of stress beacu...
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Line 13, column 455, Rule ID: LOTS_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun problem seems to be countable; consider using: 'lots of problems'.
Suggestion: lots of problems
...to deal with a lot of people or resolve lots of problem when they work in the company. That is ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, moreover, so, still, therefore, thus, while, for example, i think, in my opinion, to begin with, to sum up, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.5258426966 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.3162921348 159% => OK
Pronoun: 59.0 33.0505617978 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 73.0 58.6224719101 125% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 12.9106741573 15% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1972.0 2235.4752809 88% => OK
No of words: 424.0 442.535393258 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65094339623 5.05705443957 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53775939005 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37926697879 2.79657885939 85% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 215.323595506 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.417452830189 0.4932671777 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 605.7 704.065955056 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 6.24550561798 288% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.8661725088 60.3974514979 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.7391304348 118.986275619 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4347826087 23.4991977007 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.08695652174 5.21951772744 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229804944185 0.243740707755 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.076453695926 0.0831039109588 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0705017907246 0.0758088955206 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149805676743 0.150359130593 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0597803982465 0.0667264976115 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 14.1392134831 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 48.8420337079 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 12.1743820225 65% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 12.1639044944 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.06 8.38706741573 84% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 100.480337079 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.8971910112 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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