Universities should require every student to take a variety of courses outside the student's field of study.
The university education is considered the higher level of education. After completing the learning process in school and college, the university education is achieved. The university should allow their students to take variety of courses besides the area of concentration because this practice will enhance the knowledge of a student. Hence, I strongly agree that, the university should permit their students to take varoius courses outside of their departmental courses.
First of all, the very purpose of eductaion is illuminating the light of knowledge in a illiterate mind. Every educational institutions should always remember this very essential and crucial condition of education. If the students do not have the access to learn different subjects then their knowledge will not be broadened. Parochial mentality and superstitious beliefs impede the development of a human mind and being erudite in a proper way can enrich a human mentality by eradicating these previously mentioned notions.All the greatest philosopher of the world, like Socrates, Ptolemy, Aristotle have emphasized on the importance of widenening knowledge and broaden one's view by educating persistently in different aspects of life. Science, commerce, arts, technology everything should be taught to a student in order to wax the outlook. For example, if a student of law does not learn about the simple mathematics, not the higher level mathematics though, then it would be difficult for him or her to survive in the world. Moreover, education is not earned only for getting good jobs or becoming successful financially, it is also learned for freeing ourselves from prejudices.
Secondly, allowing students to learn more subjects not directly related to their field of study, opens the door for new innovation and novel ideas. The co- relation among subjects can be understood and realized only by gathering a sufficient amount of knowledge about different subjects. This type of phenomena has eased the way to develop the technological tools rapidly. Now finance graduates know why a rational people can work in totally an irrational way just because now they consider the psychological explanation of a logical choice being replaced by an illogical one. Scientists are considering the behavioral varieties among same type of species and thus the subject psychobiology. For this reason, it is inevitable that, university should let their students to learn variety of subjects.
However, some might think these are extraneous and will result into waste of money and time. Some people might refute this statement by incorporating that,university education must only be earned for future career not for broadening knowledge or outlook.
In a nutshell, education is the key to lead our life successfully and we should never frustate ourselves in the process of learning more and more. For the very noble purpose of education, we should strive and aspire for learning as many subjects as possible.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: an
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Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ial and crucial condition of education. If the students do not have the access to ...
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Message: Consider replacing "in a proper way" with adverb for "proper"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...pment of a human mind and being erudite in a proper way can enrich a human mentality by eradica...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: All
...ting these previously mentioned notions.All the greatest philosopher of the world, ...
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Message: Use simply 'innovation'.
Suggestion: innovation
...heir field of study, opens the door for new innovation and novel ideas. The co- relation among...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , university
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, hence, however, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, thus, for example, of course, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.3162921348 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 33.0505617978 85% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 58.6224719101 102% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 12.9106741573 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2516.0 2235.4752809 113% => OK
No of words: 464.0 442.535393258 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.4224137931 5.05705443957 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64119157421 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00338876678 2.79657885939 107% => OK
Unique words: 254.0 215.323595506 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547413793103 0.4932671777 111% => OK
syllable_count: 803.7 704.065955056 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.8701825235 60.3974514979 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.80952381 118.986275619 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0952380952 23.4991977007 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.09523809524 5.21951772744 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.83258426966 207% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237794830619 0.243740707755 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.075692164491 0.0831039109588 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0973635233622 0.0758088955206 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13292688442 0.150359130593 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.123325075056 0.0667264976115 185% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 14.1392134831 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 48.8420337079 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 12.1743820225 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.1639044944 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.38706741573 111% => OK
difficult_words: 134.0 100.480337079 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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