Universities should require students to take courses only within those fields they are interested in studying.
It is true to some extent that students need to take courses only within those fields they are interested in studying. By taking the courses which are interesting or intriguing to them they can become more productive and contribute towards the deveopment of society. However, student should also take courses which contributes towards the personality developement and finacial developement.
When the student limits his or her knowledge to certain courses in which he or she is interested, they may not able to work in the environment where knowledge of various field is required. For example, consider the booming fields of today Artificial intelligence and Machine learning. These technology are requires amalgamation of computer Science, Mathematics, Electronics, etc. The student who interested in only one of these technonogies, they may not able to work in this kind of field.
Moreover, taking courses only within one's interset hinders many aspect of developement which are helpful for the survival in the society. Student may have attain profound knowledge in the field but he may not fit in the society. Consider a student who has attained very vast knowledge in computer science field and earning lot of money. However, he or she has never taken any finacial subject in his curriculum. As a result he or she will not get to know how to invest money properly in any business. He or she may spend money wastefully. That's why many famous athletes and sportsperson became poor.
In addition to knowledge of his or her own interest, student should take courses which contribute towards the development of his or her personality. They will get to know to respond in very pressurising situation of their life. For example consider a student who is very intelligent and taken courses only within his or her radar. He may be in future face challenge in future if he does not take courses which is related to psychology.
In conclusion, Student should also take courses which contribute towards their financial, mental and personality development
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 286, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this technology' or 'These technologies'?
Suggestion: This technology; These technologies
...cial intelligence and Machine learning. These technology are requires amalgamation of computer S...
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Line 5, column 60, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun aspect seems to be countable; consider using: 'many aspects'.
Suggestion: many aspects
...urses only within ones interset hinders many aspect of developement which are helpful for t...
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Line 5, column 156, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'attained'.
Suggestion: attained
...rvival in the society. Student may have attain profound knowledge in the field but he ...
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Line 5, column 540, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
.... He or she may spend money wastefully. Thats why many famous athletes and sportspers...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, moreover, so, for example, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, as a result, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 33.0505617978 103% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 58.6224719101 72% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1725.0 2235.4752809 77% => OK
No of words: 334.0 442.535393258 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16467065868 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90799337558 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 215.323595506 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.476047904192 0.4932671777 97% => OK
syllable_count: 548.1 704.065955056 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.5988226941 60.3974514979 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 90.7894736842 118.986275619 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5789473684 23.4991977007 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.10526315789 5.21951772744 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.398259814234 0.243740707755 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125350721771 0.0831039109588 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.13205001871 0.0758088955206 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.246254036807 0.150359130593 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.122331004246 0.0667264976115 183% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 14.1392134831 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 48.8420337079 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 12.1639044944 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 100.480337079 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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