The way the message is delivered is often more important than the message.

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The way the message is delivered is often more important than the message.

The message is one of an important communication tool in our diurnal life. In our life, we sending a message to our friends and family even for a trifle thing. A message is so helpful that instead of physically appeared, we can send our thoughts to our loved ones. The process of sending a message is changed, in our modern days, we send SMS or short messaging service from our smartphone, while in the past we write a letter or send a telegram for our message. Nowadays messaging services have become a business. But the way message sent is more important than the message, I do not reciprocate with the statement for the following reasons.
Primarily, the way of a message sent is changed over time but the idea of sending a message is still booming. Software companies are earning billions of dollars from this tool. If the way of the message is so important then instead of sending a message we must physically appear to deliver the message, that would be more intimate. We send different types of message to our friends and family instead of calling or been there. For example, if a person living far from his family, it is some times assiduous to physically present there to wish them for a new year eve, so instead he or she sending a message. He might send the message in any way, but the message and the news is important not how he sends the message.
Besides, people barely remembered the way the message sent, everyone remembered what is the news in the message or the crux of the message and how we say it. For example, if we sending a message to a bereaved person in an exciting way or in exuberant language the purpose the message would be devastated. If we sending good news to our family in an austere way, they would be happy to know the news, not even care the way we sent it. So, the language or what we wrote in the message is far more important than the way it sent.
People might argue that the way message sent is also important and leave an impression to the receiver. For example, if someone sending a formal letter then how we established the language in the message and how we sent, both are important. But the message is as important as the way.
At the epilogue of the topic, I would say that message plays a vital role in our life, even sending a short message can make our family happy and what we choose to write or the crux is far more effective than the way it was sent.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 589, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'sends'.
Suggestion: sends
...or a new year eve, so instead he or she sending a message. He might send the message in...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 216, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an exciting way" with adverb for "exciting"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... sending a message to a bereaved person in an exciting way or in exuberant language the purpose th...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 343, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an austere way" with adverb for "austere"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
.... If we sending good news to our family in an austere way, they would be happy to know the news, ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 128, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'sends'.
Suggestion: sends
...o the receiver. For example, if someone sending a formal letter then how we established...
^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, so, still, then, while, for example

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 45.0 33.0505617978 136% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 58.6224719101 72% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 12.9106741573 15% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1962.0 2235.4752809 88% => OK
No of words: 448.0 442.535393258 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.37946428571 5.05705443957 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60065326758 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43734873288 2.79657885939 87% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 215.323595506 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.386160714286 0.4932671777 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 645.3 704.065955056 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.9445417487 60.3974514979 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.1 118.986275619 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4 23.4991977007 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.95 5.21951772744 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.351417511093 0.243740707755 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.16742720606 0.0831039109588 201% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.137812983232 0.0758088955206 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.23769481701 0.150359130593 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0405333670557 0.0667264976115 61% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 14.1392134831 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 48.8420337079 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.42 12.1639044944 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.67 8.38706741573 80% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 100.480337079 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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