As we acquire more knowledge, things do not become more comprehensible, but more complex and mysterious.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
The author's claim regarding acquiring more knowledge will lead to do things in a more complicated and mysterious way is agreeable. Knowledge make man stronger. Acquiring more knowledge day by day makes the man stronger and stronger day by day. Of course knowledge is very important in all the fields to lead a brilliant life. May it be in house hold activities or in the work. But with the more knowledge one can start doing things in a more complex way. Hence with more knowledge make the man do the things in a more complex and mysterious way.
"Knowledge is wealth and with the powerful knowledge one can build strong nation", as said by Vivekananda, knowledge is needed to every human on this earth. But with more knowledge, the man will start thinking in a complex way to solve a problem in turn makes the things still more complex. Consider the piece of application what has thousand lines of code. If a small mistake is found in the working of the program, it is very difficult to find out the bug creeping in the program and solve it. Here, the process of finding the error and solving becomes more complex and mysterious.
Not only in the field of development of software and application, but also in the field of automobiles and mechanics. The more complex the product, the more mysterious it becomes that makes very difficult to find out the mistakes if it ever happen. Further in the field of medicine, day by day new medicines are evolving and at the same time new diseases are also evolving. It may be likely that to eradicate the complex diseases, new medicines are invented and this inventions is affecting slowly the different parts of the body and finally turning out into a new diseases. This is insidious and cannot be figured out initially. This mystery is not resolved.
Although the previous paragraphs highlight the negative points, in contrast, with greater knowledge many things have made our life easier. The communication system has evolved so gracefully over past few decades has made the contacts with far people possible. This was possible only because of aggrandizing the knowledge, skills and inventions. Not only in the field of communication, but also in the field of transportation, agriculture, and other fields, the increase of knowledge has paved the way to invent new things that is making the life more smoother.
Thus, I totally agree that with more knowledge, makes the man think more in a complicated way in all matters. Knowledge is needed, but it is inevitable that we have to accept the paradox that the augmentation of this knowledge is making people build more complex world.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...art doing things in a more complex way. Hence with more knowledge make the man do the...
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Line 1, column 547, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s in a more complex and mysterious way. 'Knowledge is wealth and with the p...
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Line 3, column 221, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a complex way" with adverb for "complex"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... knowledge, the man will start thinking in a complex way to solve a problem in turn makes the th...
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Line 3, column 345, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a thousand'.
Suggestion: a thousand
...sider the piece of application what has thousand lines of code. If a small mistake is fo...
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Message: Did you mean 'happens'?
Suggestion: happens
...ult to find out the mistakes if it ever happen. Further in the field of medicine, day ...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Further,
...ind out the mistakes if it ever happen. Further in the field of medicine, day by day ne...
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Line 5, column 463, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...iseases, new medicines are invented and this inventions is affecting slowly the diff...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'disease'?
Suggestion: disease
...body and finally turning out into a new diseases. This is insidious and cannot be figure...
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Message: Use only 'smoother' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: smoother
...vent new things that is making the life more smoother. Thus, I totally agree that with mor...
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Line 9, column 74, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a complicated way" with adverb for "complicated"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ore knowledge, makes the man think more in a complicated way in all matters. Knowledge is needed, bu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, hence, if, may, regarding, so, still, thus, in contrast, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 14.8657303371 141% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 33.0505617978 67% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 58.6224719101 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2196.0 2235.4752809 98% => OK
No of words: 451.0 442.535393258 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86917960089 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60833598836 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79551736371 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 215.323595506 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.452328159645 0.4932671777 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 685.8 704.065955056 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.77640449438 338% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.4454182017 60.3974514979 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.5 118.986275619 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7916666667 23.4991977007 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.58333333333 5.21951772744 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 7.80617977528 128% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224525200782 0.243740707755 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0778265116244 0.0831039109588 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0945656664218 0.0758088955206 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143962452006 0.150359130593 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0609387685834 0.0667264976115 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 14.1392134831 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 48.8420337079 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.1639044944 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 100.480337079 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.8971910112 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.