You are experiencing financial problems and want to ask your landlord if you can pay your rent late. Write a letter to your landlord.In your letter explain:Why you are writing to himWhy you cannot pay the rentWhen you will pay the rent.

Essay topics:

You are experiencing financial problems and want to ask your landlord if you can pay your rent late. Write a letter to your landlord.

In your letter explain:

Why you are writing to him
Why you cannot pay the rent
When you will pay the rent.

Dear Mr. Jones,

I am writing to you with a request to allow me to pay my rent a few days late this month. I know this is a short notice but the reason for this delay is that my current company has decided to cut-back on its employees and since I was their newest, they decided that it’d be better for me to quit rather than laying-off one of their seasoned employee.

Fortunately I have managed to find another job which I will be starting next week. The HR team at my new office is very cooperative as they have agreed to loan me my salary in advance. I would therefore be able to pay you the rent by 25th of this month instead of the 5th, as is usually the practice.

I hope you would consider my situation and accept my request. I am also ready to pay you late fees for the extension, if required.

Looking forward to your response.

Yours Faithfully,

Aparna Rachapudi

Votes
Average: 3.8 (3 votes)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 63, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...der my situation and accept my request. I am also ready to pay you late fees for ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, therefore

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 732.0 937.175257732 78% => OK
No of words: 167.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.38323353293 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43152116383 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.652694610778 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 224.1 290.88556701 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.6099585937 44.8134815571 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.3333333333 76.5299724578 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5555555556 16.8248392259 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.77777777778 4.34317383033 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229863400928 0.216113520407 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107131847306 0.0766984524023 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0803991982833 0.0603063233224 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134867890809 0.12726935374 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0385553401803 0.0580467560999 66% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.12 8.71597938144 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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