You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work.
Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In the letter,
• describe the situation
• explain your problems and why it is difficult to work
• say what kind of accommodation you would prefer
Dear Sir,
I am writing to offer me another accommodation facility as I am highly dissatisfied with the current one.
The place where I stay at present is next to main road and continuous traffic noise disturb me while studying. The noise is intolerable at night as it does not allow me to sleep peacefully. Additionally, the roommate is party-loving and often throw party at night. I do not like crowd and annoying sound of vehicles. Thus, I want to look towards shifting to another area and thereby seek your support in finding such home. I would appreciate if you could suggest me some tenements which are away from the city centre and could be shared with peace-loving roommate. The calm environment is prominently needed as I am a medical student and need to concentrate fully during studies.
As the existing flat has caused myriad of problems and affected my academics, I would ask you to understand my situation and shift me to new site as per my expectation.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
XYZ
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d to concentrate fully during studies. As the existing flat has caused myriad o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, thus, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 869.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 180.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82777777778 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86685507563 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.683333333333 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 267.3 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.2898303622 44.8134815571 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.0 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3636363636 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.27272727273 4.34317383033 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164457036943 0.216113520407 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0490209867662 0.0766984524023 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0432170822093 0.0603063233224 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0960939257305 0.12726935374 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0195080094983 0.0580467560999 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 8.37731958763 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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