You saw an advertisement for a skiing course in Canada but you have one or two problems and can’t stay for the whole course.
Write a letter to the course director. In your letter
• explain your interest in the course
• describe your problems
• find out if a refund is possible
Dear Sir or Madam,
I’m writing in response to your advertisement in the Alberta Daily News for a skiing course.
I have always wanted to ski so I’m very interested in pining the course; however, I do not have my own skis and don’t wish to purchase skis at this time. Is it possible for me to hire skis and other equipment for the duration of the course? Also I have rather poor eyesight and have to wear special glasses all the time, is your course suitable for someone like me?
I’m afraid that I have to be back in Thailand by 31et January so I am unable to stay for the whole four weeks. I would like to know if its possible to receive a refund if I have to leave one week before the end of the course.
I’m looking forward very much to hearing from you. I’m really excited about learning to ski.
Yours sincerely,
Tassanee Sriporn
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 252, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...uipment for the duration of the course? Also I have rather poor eyesight and have to...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'really', 'so']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.203045685279 0.220444632235 92% => OK
Verbs: 0.147208121827 0.167888034529 88% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0558375634518 0.0606518309736 92% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0659898477157 0.0506257000042 130% => OK
Pronouns: 0.10152284264 0.118615021944 86% => OK
Prepositions: 0.106598984772 0.107062808482 100% => OK
Participles: 0.0355329949239 0.041066498444 87% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.358155728 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0609137055838 0.0385302599488 158% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00132118243153 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0558375634518 0.0714148451538 78% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00507614213198 0.0191574576366 26% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0 0.00930345855455 0% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 878.0 1141.60824742 77% => OK
No of words: 160.0 206.134020619 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4875 5.53046319177 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 3.78085437643 94% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.3125 0.284621296913 110% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.23125 0.211203875043 109% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.13125 0.133321485273 98% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.03125 0.0843313296314 37% => More words length more than 8 chars wanted.
Word Length SD: 2.358155728 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 127.690721649 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6625 0.622163163488 106% => OK
Word variations: 65.0628149566 62.8969750728 103% => OK
How many sentences: 9.0 12.9587628866 69% => OK
Sentence length: 17.7777777778 16.4300151701 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.9499687109 44.7399317507 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.5555555556 90.9928171075 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7777777778 16.4300151701 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.666666666667 0.613754768223 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.09278350515 48% => OK
Readability: 40.9027777778 37.5504026743 109% => OK
Elegance: 1.09677419355 1.13073093955 97% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.430414628707 0.331212695627 130% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.116851866833 0.0927372745006 126% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0765712515376 0.0736520305886 104% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.726652206176 0.579516596996 125% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.112686159684 0.180689518051 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.178418362589 0.122183219658 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115423691033 0.0765303033291 151% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.277816424909 0.211926503985 131% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0743877688354 0.0737400523855 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.281881126302 0.203819188451 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.129900563047 0.067151250289 193% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.45360824742 80% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.48453608247 0% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.0206185567 75% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 4.73195876289 85% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 1.03092783505 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.56701030928 78% => OK
Total topic words: 6.0 8.32989690722 72% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.