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You took your family to a nearby restaurant. You were disappointed with the meal and wish to complain to the manager.
Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. In your letter
» explain why you were at the restaurant
» describe the problems
» write about the action you want the manager to take

Dear sir,
I am Harry a regular customer of your restaurant. I always loved the food of your restaurant unlikely this time when I visited your hotel with my family on the occasion of my parent's wedding anniversary. I am writing this letter to bring your concern on the poor food and services offered in your hotel these day.

As I mentioned earlier, it was my parent's marriage anniversary on 22nd of April, so we went to 'Thali of India', the best restaurant as I thought. The wait staff was really not interested in serving us. we kept on seating for ten minutes then someone came to take our order, Although there was not much rush that day. we ordered dal makhni and kadai paneer with indian bread as a main course items. Even though we mentioned to keep the spices mild, the meal was unbearably spicy. The taste of your restaurant dishes never tasted like this earlier, whether it was the impact of your new chef or the dishes were not fresh. when we asked waiter to provide us high chair for our kid, he refused by saying that all such chairs are busy. In addition when we asked for extra sausages and napkin, we were amazed to hear that we need to pay extra money for them as well.

I just want you to train your staff some guest managing etiquettes and I hope in this highly competitive environment you believe your customers as your valuable assets. If the quality of food remains same, I bet that your restaurant will lose its charm soon hence please try to improve the quality of food.

Yours sincerely
Harry

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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Dear sir, I am Harry a regular customer of your re...
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... bring your concern on the poor food and services offered in your hotel these day...
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Message: Did you mean 'this day' or 'these days'?
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...ood and services offered in your hotel these day. As I mentioned earlier, it was my p...
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...hough there was not much rush that day. we ordered dal makhni and kadai paneer wit...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'item'?
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...neer with indian bread as a main course items. Even though we mentioned to keep the s...
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Suggestion: When
... new chef or the dishes were not fresh. when we asked waiter to provide us high chai...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
...aying that all such chairs are busy. In addition when we asked for extra sausages and na...
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... the quality of food. Yours sincerely Harry
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, really, so, then, well, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 52.0 32.9175257732 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1255.0 937.175257732 134% => OK
No of words: 278.0 206.0 135% => OK
Chars per words: 4.51438848921 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 3.78020617076 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28899394876 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 127.690721649 134% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615107913669 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 387.9 290.88556701 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 1.83505154639 272% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.9946424984 44.8134815571 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.6428571429 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8571428571 16.8248392259 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.28571428571 4.34317383033 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219904898006 0.216113520407 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0704553539198 0.0766984524023 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0671572993068 0.0603063233224 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154054186355 0.12726935374 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0620394601992 0.0580467560999 107% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 8.37731958763 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.88 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 41.2886597938 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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