Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement ?
Traveling to a country that speaks another language is already hard, living in one could raise even more problems. Not only can it cause social problems, it can make people struggle with practical issues as well. The purpose of this essay is to support the statement by demonstrating the two main reasons why living in a foreign country is hard.
First and foremost, not being able to speak another language can make it more difficult to communicate, especially when we want to make friends with the locals. Because we cannot speak their language very well, it will be challenging to try to understand their culture and adapt to the new environment. From my personal experience of living in South Korea for four months, I found it extremely difficult to translate my opinions into Korean, especially when the other person also struggled with the same thing.
Second, practical problems can also arise when it comes to not knowing the foreign language. This is exceptionally true for people who have to travel around alone. There were many times when I found myself struggled to order food and ask for directions. Since it is a new and different society we have to live in, adjusting to the new lifestyle is not likely to happen immediately.
All in all, there can be plenty of issues when dealing with the life outside our home country. Nevertheless, if we can find ways to overcome the problems, our experience in a foreign country might become more enjoyable. As countries are shifting towards globalization and people are trying to learn how to speak in a common language, communicating hopefully would not be as hard as it used to be.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 235, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'trying'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'challenge' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: trying
...guage very well, it will be challenging to try to understand their culture and adapt t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, nevertheless, second, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1367.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86476868327 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72271530973 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583629893238 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.3504117037 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.153846154 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6153846154 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.61538461538 7.06120827912 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269258509233 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.095725514171 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0742867917615 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170367451279 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110590733945 0.056905535591 194% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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