Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
While traditionally migration did not use to be so common, nowadays vast numbers of people tend to migrate to foreign countries in order to seek a better life. Although some may believe that migration does not make any problems, others, including myself, argue that it would bring a various kind of issues such as language barrier, which itself leads to communication difficulties.
Language barrier would make people isolated. Foreigners almost always have some problems in speaking and listening and so interaction with native people is difficult for them, as a result of which misinterpreting and misunderstanding could happen and a working relationship cannot be formed. Therefore, overseas people are opted out from society and feel shunned and rejected.
Moreover, migrants usually do not have successful job prospects. As their language skills are not fluent yet, they would face many problems at their workplace, especially in communicating with clients or writing official letters. Consequently, most of the time they do not perform well at work and are made redundant, resulting in financial problems as well.
On the other hand, some may argue that language barrier is not a significant problem since migrants could learn the new language fast and easily. However, it should be noted that adults’ brains are not much fresh to learn a new language straightforwardly and this is just possible for young children.
In conclusion, I think migrating to another country with another language to speak, might cause so many difficulties. The main ones are, feeling isolated and not being able to find a job.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
While traditionally migration did not use to be so common, nowadays vast numbers ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, i think, in conclusion, kind of, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1371.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33463035019 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00255005248 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.642023346304 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 409.5 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.461939274 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.25 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4166666667 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.8333333333 7.06120827912 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156310247869 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0527363917018 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0343479837322 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0807607711351 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0168775047439 0.056905535591 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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