Many people think that money is the best gift to give a teenager, but others disagree.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion including relevant examples.
Always people have encountered with the challenge of selection of gift for others. People's notions differ as to whether or not given the cash money to younger people is the best choice. While some people support it, others put forward an opposite opinion. I personally consider money as the best present for this age group.
To commence with, those who disagree with donating the gift in cash, propose several reasons. Firstly, they believe that it is more likely teenager due to lack of sufficient financial experiences, do not fulfil the optimal usage of this money. Indeed they tend to commit this responsibility by purchase a commodity as gift regardless of their interest. For example, teenager may expend their cash present to buy a computer game, although it could be used for purchasing book instead of game. Secondly, having money, especially if it is much, will encourage young people to crime. Put it differently, teenagers are at sensitive during of their life liking to try new things. Cash money give them a chance to test drug for instance. Since they are not wiser and mature, there is a serve probability that they fall in trap of addiction.
On the other hand, some people enumerate a plethora of merits for giving the cash gift. To begin with, it provides an opportunity to gain the skill of money management. That is, when youngers receive money as the present, they can either allocate it to their needs or saving it according their priority. The more this situation is repeated for them the more they are able to rectify their ability in this case. So they will gradually become expert regarding it. Moreover, by means of cash gift they not only take enormous pleasures out of it, but also get a sense of autonomy and freedom. Take Pocket money as an illustration which is paid by their parents, although it apparently becomes their own, parents investigate about it. Therefor, it inspires them a control feel while their presents belong to themselves. So, they can freely make various decisions regarding their personal property. Because of above reason, I agree with cash money as the best item of present for teenagers.
In conclusion, less experience of young people in managing money as well as shortage of their qualification in possessing more money, have led to disputing some people about this issue. However, some people such as me embrace this suggestion because of it's advantages in terms of learning new personal skill also the freedom and independence created by it.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 107, Rule ID: WHETHER[4]
Message: Wordiness: Shorten this phrase to the shortest possible suggestion.
Suggestion: whether; whether or not; as to whether
...gift for others. Peoples notions differ as to whether or not given the cash money to younger people ...
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Suggestion: Indeed,
...fulfil the optimal usage of this money. Indeed they tend to commit this responsibility...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ey tend to commit this responsibility by purchase a commodity as gift regardless ...
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Suggestion:
...ve money as the present, they can either allocate it to their needs or saving it ...
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Suggestion:
...y. Because of above reason, I agree with cash money as the best item of present ...
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Suggestion:
... agree with cash money as the best item of present for teenagers. In conclusion...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, well, while, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 24.0651302605 220% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2086.0 1615.20841683 129% => OK
No of words: 422.0 315.596192385 134% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94312796209 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53239876712 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61583469217 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 240.0 176.041082164 136% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568720379147 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 664.2 506.74238477 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.0562239376 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.9166666667 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5833333333 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.95833333333 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172678480118 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0550363310418 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0489735876358 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120971742008 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0420982973936 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 78.4519038076 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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