Online shopping is increasing dramatically. How could this trend affect our environment and the kinds of jobs required
Thanks to the Internet, online shopping has been experiencing a boom in business. In this essay, the environmental and employment effects of this trend will be examined.
Of course, the growth of e-shopping has contributed remarkably in reducing carbon footprint because of the fact that it eliminates car trips that shoppers make to buy goods at shopping malls and showrooms. However, the picture does not look rosy as online shopping has actually caused overpackaging and the higher volume of transportation, making the environmental pollution worse. Firstly, most shoppers often choose to receive home-delivered products as soon as possible, and rush delivery means more delivery trucks to meet the delivery deadline. Second, many brands and e-shopping platforms make it possible and easier to return unwanted items without cost while the consequences to the environment of returning items is that they require repackaging and double the transportation.
In terms of employment impact of ecommerce, the retail industry has been reshaped in both positive and negative ways. On the one hand, when online shopping is more popular, it reduces the number of brick-and-mortar stores which create thousands of retail jobs. On the other hand, this trend offers opportunities for sale workers who are willing to alter their skill sets to adapt to work online. Also, the rise of shopping online boosts the development of the manufacturing industry and distribution process, creating more jobs. Besides, the increase of ecommerce companies will spur employment needs for workers involved in digital marketing, website design or system maintenance.
In conclusion, online shopping is on the rise, and this trend brings both advantages and disadvantages to the environment and employment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 93, Rule ID: BECAUSE_OF_THE_FACT_THAT
Message: This phrase is redundant. Use simply 'because'.
...remarkably in reducing carbon footprint because of the fact that it eliminates car trips that shoppers m...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, besides, but, first, firstly, however, look, second, so, while, in conclusion, of course, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1516.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.57352941176 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09990791246 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.610294117647 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.5166634 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.333333333 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6666666667 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.25 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220964883216 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0793405515931 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0616420428277 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157011636938 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0578039299208 0.056905535591 102% => OK
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.32 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.