Online shopping is increasing dramatically. How could dis trend effect our environment and the kinds of jobs required
Today Life becoming more busy,people don't has enough time for shopping.So, they prefer online shopping dat becoming more popular.But everything has two aspects like a coin has two sides, darker and brighter side. Same On line shopping has its drawbacks as well as its benefits.
People can purchase everything from staying at home.They will not have to go outside for buying things. So, there will be less traffic congestion and pollution will decrease dat is good for saving our environment.For example,In my country(India) there is more pollution as a result quantity of oxygen is going down.So on line shopping is the best way to reduce pollution. This will also good for IT graduates coz there will be more jobs in IT field but it will pay the bad TEMPeffect on other qualified people.As a result unemployment may climb up. I give u a real example of my brother, He did his job in a company but he lost it 5 months ago due to less knowledge of computer. Even he got master degree but those person who appointed TEMPhas only IT diploma.So on line shopping helps to rise unemployment.
As a conclusion, Its advantages are overweight its disadvantages. But government can reduce these disadvantages also, if he gives other jobs to unemployed people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, well, for example, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1038.0 1615.20841683 64% => OK
No of words: 213.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87323943662 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95703844271 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 327.6 506.74238477 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.1371986207 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.333333333 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6666666667 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.073951090489 0.244688304435 30% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0294841889372 0.084324248473 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0170931667911 0.0667982634062 26% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0486678502594 0.151304729494 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.012851172279 0.056905535591 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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