In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing. What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?
The growing obesity rate is a problem of controversy. Health international organization have informed people about its toll on the body. There is a plenty of research that introduces several main reasons for this issue. long working hours is one of the main reasons which inflict people to eat junk foods which have low nutritive value in comparison to traditional foods. Fast food store often uses low-quality material for cooking which is causes increasing amount of calories and fat in the foods that enter the human body and made damages in some cases.
Also, it should be noted that lack of exercise is another reason which can be observed in the underdeveloped countries more than developed countries. Culture of every region plays an important role in people life. People who used to play a sport regularly since their childhood have higher level of health and fitness with respect to others. Plus, laziness can be reason for not exercising. For example, Japanese learn kids to play sports weekly which leads to increasing of living hope between them.
Ill-informing people by government is another reason. Well-educating people about foods and hazards of overeating decreases the number of obese people. For instance, people who used fried foods can boil them or cook them in another healthier way.
To wrap it up, I strongly believe media can play an important role in solving this issue. It can inform people and modify their culture about exercising that both, together would have strong impact on average level of health and fitness in the world.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, well, for example, for instance, in some cases, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1316.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1007751938 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58480348614 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.616279069767 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 405.9 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.3609585103 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.7333333333 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.13333333333 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175032203903 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0571808552308 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0396324116321 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10728049594 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0286961349862 0.056905535591 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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