Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
Yes, we do have too many choices nowadays. Advertisements and marketing have contributed a lot to this cause. We live in an era where there is an alternative to almost everything. These choices provide unbeatable competition to one another making it almost impossible for a consumer to make a decision.
Firstly, in this dynamic world nothing is constant. Everything keeps changing in a blink of an eye. Today’s trend could be tomorrow’s history. These rapid changes give rise to new choices every day. For instance, consider the example of technology. I think it is the most rapidly growing industry in today’s scenario. It is no mystery that the advancements in the field of technology have been unbelievable. Newer models of mobile phones, televisions, laptops, computers, etc. are hitting the market every day providing the consumer a tremendous amount of options to choose from.
Secondly, the best example of too many choices I have conspicuously noticed is in the fashion and makeup industries. Newer and better makeup is introduced in the market so often that the consumer has an enormous amount of choices to choose from. In the fashion industry the new trends in clothing provide the customer with a bulk of options. Not only this, the fashion trends considered to be outdated are making a comeback, hence, increasing the number of choices one has.
Too many choices can be seen as either boon or bane. Having choices is a good thing as it provides alternatives but at the same time it can cause confusion in one’s mind. But it’s hard to draw a line between too many choices and just the right amount of choices. Concluding, some people enjoy having many choices and some like to have fewer choices to make a sound decision.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, second, secondly, so, for instance, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1475.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01700680272 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90603016809 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56462585034 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.7806797923 49.4020404114 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.2380952381 106.682146367 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0 20.7667163134 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.38095238095 7.06120827912 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 3.4128256513 322% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134072016755 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.043333912395 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0420341738321 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0871471012846 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0270014483286 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.0946893788 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.24 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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