Some people believe that we have too many choices these days. To what extent to you agree or disagree?
It’s often considered that, in modern life, there is a variety of choices. I believed that in some issues such as show programs and entertainment, it’s true that people can have a huge number of options, however, we have still faced items with restricted options. Both views will be discussed in the following paragraphs.
On the one hand, it’s obvious that the technology revolution has changed people's lifestyle over the decades. By reading history books or watching documentaries, it can be seen that in the past people spend their spare time by roaming in the park or watching TV which had a few programs, but in the technology-edge era, the number of activities that can be done in the free time is countless, the smartphone is the sea of entertainment just by itself. Additionally, the transportation system affects the way people traveling, it becomes much faster, easier and convenient. So individuals can opt wherever they want more accessible than before.
On the other hand, in some cases, the old method and options are still popular and the innovation can’t be influenced them. In many countries, the kind of jobs is the same as it was in the past. For example, a person who has a master’s degree in mathematics can choose a few options as a future job. Although, the math is the foundation of many sciences which can be used in the interdisciplinary subjects, the graduate in this field can be a math teacher or bank cashier in most cases.
To conclude, however, there are many options to select such as entertainment and travel with regard to the technology revolutionary, some issues such as job are still limited and the option for choosing are restricted.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, still, for example, kind of, such as, in most cases, in some cases, with regard to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1422.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97202797203 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05577602713 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583916083916 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 78.5560663193 49.4020404114 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.5 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8333333333 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.25 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.106019880774 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0367746946488 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0460894027498 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0686225393728 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0379631949769 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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