Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, people have been able to travel to other countries easily by modern transports, namely trains and planes. Therefore, languages have been becoming very important in our recent life. Several people believe that people only study new languages for going abroad and working in another country, while others advocated opinion that is there are other reasons for people to study new language. In my opinion, I strongly agree with the latter.
It is understandable why people think purposes to study new languages are so as to go abroad or work in another country. The key rational in favor of this view is that the natural curiosity of human being. People want to go abroad in order to broaden their knowledge and visit tourist attraction. The next reason is the better salary in foreign country. For instance, in Vietnam, an I.T developer is paid 5 million VND per month, meanwhile, the standard salary for a developer in Singapore is about 4 thousand SGD which is approximately 5 times than in Vietnam.
However, we also can study new languages so as to communicate with foreigners. If people only know their mother tongue, it is impossible for them to talk with people in another country. Therefore, it is very hard for importing and exporting goods in a country and this country will face poverty. In addition, languages are also the tool to learn about the culture and the tradition of other countries. I perfectly exemplify this situation. I used to a manga geek when I was a student, but at this time, most of the manga which means Japanese comics on the internet was written by Japanese and I could not understand. Thus, I decided to learn Japanese to satisfy my hobby.
In conclusion, studying new languages is really essential for going abroad or working in another country, but there are many other purposes such as improving finance of a country or learn about the culture and the tradition of another country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, really, so, therefore, thus, while, as to, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1609.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8905775076 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6637275433 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528875379939 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 510.3 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.0047209419 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.6470588235 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3529411765 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.70588235294 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239181619237 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0715665696542 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0708074411944 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145585991401 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0296120451332 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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