Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not only reasons why somebody should learn a foreign language.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Studying is always one of the top concerns of students, in which learning a foreign language is quite vital. It is said that travelling and working abroad is two main reasons for anybody to study languages while others believe there are still many other cases for anybody to learn. This essay will discuss both these views.
On the one hand, nowadays, means of transport has been developed so much that a large number of people want to visit famous places around the world to enjoy beautiful scenery and experiencing different cultures. Therefore, to perform this, it is essential for everybody to study a second or even third or forth language. Besides, working abroad is also a great idea for people who wants something new in working fields or environment. Moreover, in some countries, the well- known factories can provide us with a high salary, leading to a bright life that is so useful for ourselves and our next generation.
\On the other hand, there are still some other reasons for studying languages and one of them is relationship. Many people have a desire to extend their relationship with others from different places of the world. We can communicate comfortably with each other without worrying too much about language barrier. Furthermore, most of sources of information today such as books, novels or articles on the Internet have been written or translated into certain languages so that mastering knowledge also prompts us to try our best to learn a foreign language.
In conclusion, human learning languages is due to so many reasons that we are not able to tell all. Personally, i think besides travelling and working overseas, there are other cases to study languages that depends on so much the individual's favourite.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
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Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the sources') or simply say ''most sources''.
Suggestion: most of the sources; most sources
...ch about language barrier. Furthermore, most of sources of information today such as books, nov...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...e are not able to tell all. Personally, i think besides travelling and working ov...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, furthermore, if, moreover, second, so, still, therefore, third, well, while, i think, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1454.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99656357388 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69454815186 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584192439863 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.3584595268 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.846153846 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3846153846 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9230769231 7.06120827912 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263876684977 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0919946986773 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0538644959152 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167661340813 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0760238935484 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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