Some people think that all teenagers should be required to do unpaid work in their free time to help the local community. They believe this would benefit both the individual teenager and society as a whole. Do you agree or disagree?
It is thought that all adolesences should be forced to do unpaid work in their leisure time to support the local community. From my point of view, i partly agree with this notion because of its benefitcal for the society. The following essay will analyse this statement in detail.
In the industrialized world and with the appearance of modern technology, the proportion of teenagers who suffer from mental diseases have increased gradually, so charity activities is greatly significant for the development. It is noticeable that not only does this phenomenon improve the young, but also it will lead to positive influence for the people's life. Firstly, the social knowledge and interesting skills can be passed on to the young generation; as the result, their abilities and cognitive behaviors will be advanced. Furthermore, the children can paticipate in valuable experience; therefor, they can avoid to some social-evil such as addicted to drugs. Secondly, this activity have a profusion of impact for the society. The profortion of illitterate people will be reduced as the results of the supported from postgraduates, which have plenty of effect for the improvement of their country.
On the other hand, this trend also have some negative aspects for the teenager. To start with, children should not be required to do their dislike acitivities since the productivity will be decreased and numerous controversials and conflicts will happen due their bad attitude. In addition, if children pay too much attention of charity work, their will forget other subject in their college such as math, sicence techonology or literature. For instance, some extroverts student will find more exciting to enroll in charity club than their lecture, so they will easier to fail in the final exam.
To conclude, beside some negative aspects of this trend, i believe that helping the local community is really importance for the individual teenager and society as a whole.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...de some negative aspects of this trend, i believe that helping the local communit...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, really, second, secondly, so, for instance, in addition, such as, to start with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1649.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25159235669 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8908094333 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592356687898 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 522.0 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.6072902152 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.785714286 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4285714286 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1428571429 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267620590642 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0898990334788 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0854565450877 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188926513644 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0719961550786 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ill analyse this statement in detail. In the industrialized world and with the...
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Line 2, column 352, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'peoples'' or 'people's'?
Suggestion: peoples'; people's
...will lead to positive influence for the peoples life. Firstly, the social knowledge and...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...for the improvement of their country. On the other hand, this trend also have ...
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Line 3, column 463, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'extroverts'' or 'extrovert's'?
Suggestion: extroverts'; extrovert's
...ology or literature. For instance, some extroverts student will find more exciting to enro...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...ill easier to fail in the final exam. To conclude, beside some negative aspect...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...de some negative aspects of this trend, i believe that helping the local communit...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, really, second, secondly, so, for instance, in addition, such as, to start with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1649.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25159235669 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8908094333 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592356687898 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 522.0 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.6072902152 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.785714286 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4285714286 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1428571429 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267620590642 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0898990334788 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0854565450877 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188926513644 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0719961550786 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.