Some universities now offer their courses on the Internet so that people can study online.
Is this a positive or negative development?
In the recent days, with the development of technology, student in the universities are able to study through the Internet the courses which their school offers. In my opinion, this phenomenon has both advantages and disadvantages.
There is a variety of benefits of allowing learners to study online. The first one is that it enables student to have flexible time to learn which is much more comfortable than following particular schedule at school. Secondly, a lot of time could be saved as learners do not need to commute to school as well as prepare clothes . For example, If they studied offline, they must get up about 30 minutes or 1 hour earlier to eat breakfast, iron clothes and get dress while studying on the Internet, individuals only need to login and join the classes.
However, this phenomenon also leading to some drawbacks. The primary matter is that it requires the independence and persistence of learners. This is because, while studying online, they are out of control of their teachers, hence there are many distractions which disturb our focus such as social media, games, therefore decreasing the efficiency of learning. Moreover, smart phones, laptops or computer are essential devices when studying online, but it only suitable for the family who have descend salary and the prosperous. For example, when the covid pandemic broke out, all student had to learn online to prevent the spread of corona virus, however, according to the daily news, many family suffered from difficulties as they can not afford to buy smart devices for their kids.
In conclusion, I believe that offering online courses for student is beneficial because it not only saves time but also provide student the flexibility schedule, however, there are also the disadvantages since learners are easy to distract and those who do not live in good condition are unable to buy equipment.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
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Message: Use past participle here: 'descended'.
Suggestion: descended
...t only suitable for the family who have descend salary and the prosperous. For example,...
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Line 3, column 686, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun family seems to be countable; consider using: 'many families'.
Suggestion: many families
..., however, according to the daily news, many family suffered from difficulties as they can ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1576.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08387096774 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7302500547 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596774193548 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 501.3 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 78.841745499 49.4020404114 160% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.333333333 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8333333333 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.0 7.06120827912 184% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186972508852 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0633544982966 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0608681512477 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117323723805 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.067052193461 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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