In Britain, when someone gets old they often go to live in a home with
other old people where there are nurses to look after them. Sometimes
the government has to pay for this care.
Who do you think should pay for this care, the government or the family?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
The concept of "old age home" or "the retirement home" is becoming common these days in Britain. Elderly people such as parents are usually sent to nursing homes under professional nurses supervision when they turn old and weak. Often, the government has to pay for this facility. In my opinion I believe that children are responsible for their parents in the same way, they were responsible to them, during their child years.
Firstly, Parents are parents, and they should be respected and treated equally. However, in todays hustle and busy lives, where everybody works round the clock to meet both ends, it is becoming impossible to take care of elderly people. Children send their parents to nursing homes to make sure they are being treated well, taken care of and are properly fed. Therefore, it is the guardians responsibility to provide proper care to their parents and should pay for all their relevant expenses if affordability allows it. For instance, in North Carolina, an old couple was thrown-out of the nursing care due to non-payment for several months. They were later taken into government custody and were admitted to public nursing home.
Secondly, there is a huge price difference between public and private run nursing homes and the quality of care equal. For instance, In UK per month cost in public nursing home is 400 pounds whereas, private facilities charge an exuberant price as high as 800-1500 pounds a month. Such high cost is definitely not affordable to the majority of people. Government should pass a resolution to shut-down all private nursing homes and develop more old age homes to cater rising demand.
To sum it up, children should take responsibility of their elders. If they are unable to provide them proper care at home they can admit them in a good nursing home provided they pay for all expenses. On the other hand, government is responsible to offer quality nursing homes for elderly people on affordable rates.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 381, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'guardians'' or 'guardian's'?
Suggestion: guardians'; guardian's
... are properly fed. Therefore, it is the guardians responsibility to provide proper care t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, whereas, as to, for instance, such as, in my opinion, in the same way, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1656.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0487804878 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62713610999 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530487804878 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 522.9 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.7046127557 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.4117647059 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2941176471 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.17647058824 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.352164769239 0.244688304435 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119839806924 0.084324248473 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0888141171105 0.0667982634062 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.228572704109 0.151304729494 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.050165921559 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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