Employers sometimes ask people applying for jobs for personal information, such as their hobbles and interests, and whether they are married or single.
Some people say that this Information may be relevant and useful. Others disagree.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
It is true to say that a reputation of a company is in the hands of its staff. Therefore, recruiters today are keen on particular details of the aspirants they hire. Although, most people think that it is irrelevant and useless to collect personal data like hobbies and marital status of employees, others think that it is valuable information which would help a company to select a candidate for the long-term job. Personally, I am in the favor of the latter view.
It is easy to understand why an employer is interested in personal information section of a resume. Firstly, a person’s pastime activities reflect his personality traits apart from technical skills. However sound in his work, if a person lacks social skills he will find it difficult to develop a healthy workplace long-term relationship with his colleagues. This would eventually render him to reach a high-level position. Secondly, the marital status of a person says a lot about him. The way he is responsible and caring. Also, from such an individual it could be expected that they know how to remain calm and tackle the situation of conflicts instead of making any hasty arguments.
On the other hand, some people argue that qualification and work experience details are enough to make a choice for a particular job. It is certain that a relevant education and an appropriate work experience in the required field must be the priority of management while filling up a vacant position but, the fact that other information should be completely avoided is hard to grasp.
All in all, I would reiterate my statement that it is vital for any organization to gather all the information before selecting an employee as it would be beneficial to both an individual as well as the company.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 189, Rule ID: BOTH_AS_WELL_AS[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
...uld be beneficial to both an individual as well as the company.
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, apart from, as well as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1462.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90604026846 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92274751606 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590604026846 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.2530114279 49.4020404114 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.428571429 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2857142857 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.92857142857 7.06120827912 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254739146142 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.069767257917 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0534677176943 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137549233952 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0340885416149 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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