Many elderly people are no long er looked after by their families but are put in care home or nursing home. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend
Recently, some families no longer look after their aged members such as grandpa and grandma. They prefer to entrust them in the hands of caregiver or nursing home.Older ones can have adequate care and also network with their fellow folks when staying in care homes,although there are draw backs to be taken into account.
On the one hand, there are number of advantages to elderly people have staying in nursing home.Firstly, it will give them adequate care since most nursing home have plethora of specialist that can handle nutrition, heartdisease, varicose to mention few. Unlike staying at home where the family members are busy working hard to make money to build their future. For instance, older people who suffer from osteoporosis which requires expensive equipement to manage are readily available in most nursing home.Secondly, staying in a nursing home will give them the priviledge to network with their agemate whereby they can share ideas and view together. This tends to make them to be lively and friendly seeing their fellow folks.
On the other hand, one problem when older people are staying is that they suffer from depressions. Being isolated from their lovely and usual environment can make them to feel lonely and sad. This can result to psychological trauma and moodiness. According to research carried outcin UK, it was discovered that 85% of older folks staying in nursing home as mental problems caused by loneliness.However taking care of the aged at home is more effective than nursing home.
To conclude, it can be deduced that despite the benefits of elderly staying in nursing home, it can lead to depression which could result to mental illness.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, look, second, secondly, so, for instance, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1412.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11594202899 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65159968441 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561594202899 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 78.55281952 49.4020404114 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.363636364 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0909090909 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306253679113 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117295995229 0.084324248473 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0630952148778 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191076844618 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0583077070485 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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