Many old buildings are protected by law and are part of a nation's history. Some people think they should be knocked down and replaced by news ones.
How important is it to maintain old buildings?
Should history stand in the way of progress?
Tourism across the globe thrives on historical locations which fascinates and attracts tourists. Despite many countries having policies around conservation of old relics and structures, there are a few who feel that old buildings must be demolished and new ones should take their place. This essay will discuss in detail the relevance of conserving old structures while arguing how the antiquity need not necessarily block the way to future.
To start with, these structures not only satisfy man's fascination with his past but also throws light on the human evolution. For example, the castle of Edinburgh gives an amazing insight on the strength and might, used in constructing the castle along with the strategy behind selecting a mountain-top to build it. Ancient stone buildings also portrays architectural excellence and craftman-ship used in ancient times. They are a stepping stone to help us understand ourselves better.
Having said that, history should not be blamed for hindering growth of a nation. Tourism is a fantastic way to ensure that a country's history is not just preserved but actually becomes its identity. For example, Paris is known for its architectural marvel that is Eiffel Tower while Agra is famous because of Taj Mahal. People flock from all over the world just to catch a glimpse of these buildings which are also known as one of the eight wonders of the world. Law-makers can infact benefit by preserving their historical monuments and use the income generated, for their country's growth.
To sum up, the essay discussed in detail the significance of preserving and cherishing ones history and old buildings that not only give us insight on our past but also acts an an excellent source of revenue for the country thereby helping in overall development instead of hampering their progress.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, so, while, for example, to start with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1535.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18581081081 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75874125378 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608108108108 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.2573356734 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.076923077 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7692307692 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.61538461538 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185032377557 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0594171716513 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0575357979349 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107989127652 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0483422452148 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.