Many people want their country to host an international sporting event. Others believe that international sporting events bring more problems than benefits.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
To conduct and hold international matches is a great task of responsibility and reputation for the host country. Some believe that these activities are good whereas others not think in the same way. I am a strong advocate of hosting global sports events as it improves the nation’s economy and relationship with other countries.
A good reason to have intercontinental events is that it could play a pivotal role to make good relationships worldwide. Many people get chance to interact with citizens from other countries, and they might exchange ideas and cultural values to flourish their personalities. Furthermore, another critical reason to support these events is that it can astronomically raise the hosting country’ economy. For instance, when India conducted common wealth games in 2012, it attracted many tourists from various countries which eventually helped the local communities. They were able to market their own products such as home-made cookies, baskets and crafts.
On the other hand, some opine that nation could face security threats as on these occasions gates would be open for all, and government has to invest more money in military and defense services to protect their country. Moreover, higher management can fund this money to develop their nation. For instance, it could be utilized to build schools, hospitals and roads.
In conclusion, despite the dark side of holding international sports, I still support these events as they brings more opportunities for local people to support not only themselves but their country as well which will eventually maintain harmonious terms among all nations.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 108, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'bring'
Suggestion: bring
...s, I still support these events as they brings more opportunities for local people to ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, moreover, so, still, well, whereas, as to, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in the same way, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1392.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4375 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94247210519 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6484375 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.8487011282 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.0 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3333333333 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0833333333 7.06120827912 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232560399474 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0731648580861 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.046416722763 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13520926175 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0523407362018 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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