In many places, new homes are needed, but the only space available for building them is in the countryside. Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there. What is your opinion about this? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
The population has seen an exponential growth in numbers. A land resource is limited and the space available in the cities for building new homes is getting shortfall. Due to which, many infrastructure developers are getting attracted towards the countryside due to its lesser value, natural beauty and clean environment. However, some activists believe that the countryside must be protected from the development of the homes and other industries, the detailed discussion is elaborated in the below-paragraphs.
When compared with the city milieu, the countryside has less population as well as pollution. The people in villages are depended on limited earning opportunities like farming, dairy, animal husbandry, etc. These profession requires substantial land area, it might be for grazing of animals or for agricultural purpose. If the people start migrating towards the countryside, there will be a shortage of prosperous land leading to a deficit of food and dairy products for fulfilling the growing demands, thereby leading to a lousy situation for food management and ultimately giving rise to inflation.
Moreover, due to an insignificant increase in an industrialization, the pollution in the cities is causing detrimental effects to the living beings. People have started building their second homes at the remote areas; specifically in the villages to enjoy the true beauty of the nature. Additionally, if the number of houses increases further, the biodiversity of the place can affect chronically, subsequently giving rise to uncertain rainfall or change in climatic conditions of the area.
In my opinion, barren land must be utilised in place of the cultivable land in remote areas, or else the laws and regulations must be made to limit the movement of people to the countryside to avoid damage to the wildlife; instead with the help of technology multi-storey apartments must be developed in the place of single row houses in the city. The increase in number of floors of a building will undermine the people thoughts of migrating to the villages, thus saving the countryside from getting exploited.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'this profession' or 'These professions'?
Suggestion: This profession; These professions
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, second, so, thus, well, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1795.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.39039039039 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18130150061 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552552552553 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 569.7 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.98395969 49.4020404114 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.076923077 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6153846154 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.53846153846 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256230015438 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0830530802461 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0749778837386 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144325988723 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0673116740512 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.86 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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