In some countries people of all ages place extra emphasis on sports and exercising. Do you think it is a positive development? Give your opinion and relevant examples from your own experience.
there is no iota of doubt that, people today are very careful about their health and career, so they emphasis on sports and exercise. this phenomenon is offering multifarious benefits to people of all ages. however, sometimes a couple of problem emerges due to the same. In my opinion, it is a positive development in some extent, beyond this it can be negative. The following paragraphs would shed light on pros and cons of this trend.
To begin with the bright side, first, doing extra effort on sports and exercise we can produce more athletes. Therefore, these athletes can bring more pride for our nation. For example, recent survey says that, in Australia players who put more emphasis on their own field bring gold medals on Olympic. As a result, by putting more effort people can achieve their own goals in the field of sports. In addition, due to sedentary jobs and lack of physical activities, people are suffering from obesity. hence, with regular exercise and sports they can easily overcome this problem. Moreover, these activities can make people more socialize and friendly. so, people can make and meet more friends due to these activities.
On the flip side of the coin, there are a handful of nasty consequences as well. Firstly, to give extra importance in sports and exercise will affect one's social, personal as well as corporate life. this means, a person can feel alone when he is away from their family. For instance, cricket player playing foreign tours have to stay months away from their home, this can feel them lonely and sometimes affect their performance. it can steer him into the stage of depression and might cause harm to his life. Furthermore, these activities require a plethora of physical strength to play effectively with other teams and everybody is not strong enough for those. this may further de-motivate individuals and they may decide not to take part in challenging competitions.
In conclusion, I personally believe that the de-merit outweigh merits, however, effort should be made to minimize the latter one.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1723.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 344.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00872093023 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56018516255 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601744186047 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 540.9 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.0373908612 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 82.0476190476 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.380952381 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.19047619048 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123776461097 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0372487435976 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0382490523719 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0674737640969 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0495355104853 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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