Some people believe famous people’s support towards international aid organizations draws attention to problems. Others think celebrities make the problems less important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Celebrity affiliation with help agencies and NGO’s are quite common these days. It is believed that their endorsements assist to highlight problems. Nevertheless, sometimes promotion by favorite people diverts the main issues.
People who ponder that celebrities add a value for aid organization have some rationales. To begin with, popular person has huge fan followings and their followers blindly support the promotion or cause. As a result, issues or problems are discussed and get required focus and people generously donate or contribute in order to resolve the complexities. A case in a point is an association of cricket legend Sachin Tendularkar with skill India Program that captioned the lack of awareness on skills and motive affluent and handy person to come forward and provide resolution to skill issues. Furthermore, revered individual not only pull the crowd but also enable the moment fierce and keep the spirit of the program high and enchanting.
On the other hand, celebrity linking with prominent issues diminishes the seriousness of the topic and necessary direction is lost. It is observed sometimes that attention is given to popular people but not the real agenda. Consequently, burgeoning issues are not confiscated by the people and fans found more interest in gossips and captivating style and fashion adorned by the icons. For instance, a Bollywood actress choose to link with nutrition related issues but could not garner the support for real topic and mesmerized people by exposing beauty.
To recapitulate, though famous people bring attention on issues owing to followers and provide necessary assistance for iron out the issues, in some cases they divert the honest issues and waste efforts and resources. I opiate that benefits of association of celebrity outweigh the disadvantages.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, nevertheless, so, for instance, as a result, in some cases, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 10.4138276553 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1551.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44210526316 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88856545766 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60701754386 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.4381439504 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.785714286 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3571428571 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.28571428571 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20523902178 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0695102191551 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0493243574152 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119442556806 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00640863671344 0.056905535591 11% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.84 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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