Some people think that having a set of retirement age(eg 65 years) for everybody, regardless of occupation, is unfair. They believe that certain workers deserve to retire and receive a pension at an earlier age.
Do you agree or disagree?
Which types of workers do you think should benefit from early retirement?
Many people opine that the stipulated retirement age of 65 years for all working age is unreasonable, they think it should be more flexible with exemptions for certain workers. I am in complete agreement with this opinion because people’s years of working differs, and some professions deserve to retire and receive pension at an earlier age due to its physical demanding nature. Notwithstanding, in this discourse, these and more will be explored, accordingly.
Undoubtedly, the main reason why I believe that a fixed retirement age is not actually best for everybody is because vast majority of employees have fewer active working years. This is because some people started their job probably at a very advanced age. Take for instance, my uncle, who started working at the age of thirty-eight years, as compared to his colleagues that has been employed since their twenties. Evidently, from the above, it is clear that having a set retirement age for all will not be practical.
Personally, I think that people working in a physically and psychologically stressful role ought to retire earlier because of the strenuous nature of their job. The justification for this argument might be because professions such as construction, military, and mining devote their entire career life and energy diligently performing their responsibilities on a regular basis, yet without embarking on annual leave. To illustrate, if workers are arbitrarily retired at this age, it would be seen as an unfair. Therefore, it is obvious that those employed in these demanding professions should be exempted from this late retirement age.
In conclusion, I reiterate that I totally believe that all workers retiring at a fixed age is not an ideal one, rather some kind of workers should be made to benefit by retiring and receiving entitlement at a younger age. This is because of the difference in each employee’s working years as well as stressful nature of some jobs. Given this situation, it means that the retirement policy should take these issues into consideration.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, actually, if, so, therefore, well, for instance, i think, in conclusion, kind of, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1735.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22590361446 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0417735041 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542168674699 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 554.4 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.4287624137 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.928571429 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7142857143 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.14285714286 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.378436996173 0.244688304435 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.142207005485 0.084324248473 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101165122109 0.0667982634062 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.251129969847 0.151304729494 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0480249300034 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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