Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctic?
What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?
Everyone required a break from hectec daily routine to enjoy the nature and get themselves refresh for coming days. Tourism play a vital role in this regards where people can take off from work and enjoy different places. Now a days, it has been observed the masses are trying to do adentures by visting areas where conditions are not so friendly. As it has many advantages, it can also bring some disadvantages as well which are discussed below.
It is said that if you are not taking any risk in life then this is the biggest risk of your life. Tourists who put them in challenging situation by adenturing in this the tough conditions come back more strong both mentally and physically. Similarly, it can bring some sense of achievement and that can ultimately boost up the self confidence. Furthermore, I have observed in my surroundings that people who visit places that offer challenging environment are more humble, polite and friendly in nature. I had an adventure in my life of trekking 4-5 days for visting base camp of Nangparbat that is 9th tallest mountain in the world and it gives me a feeling of accomplishment. I had made palenty of stunning menmories and I met some amazingly friendly people during the adventure. Overall, it was tough, challenging but it was more than just worth it.
On the contrary, if challenges are not taken seriously then these can bring problems as well. Challenging yourself by visiting areas with tough conditions requires some preparation both mentally and physically. For instance, if anybody is visiting antarctic in cold condition then he/she should be well prepared to face the tough weather otherwise they may cause damage to health. And this will not only spoil the tour but it will also be a demotivating factor for them. Moreover visiting such difficult condition can also bring financial problems. For instance, once my friends planned to visit a desert however their jeep was not up to the mark. They took the risk and not only they got stuck in desert but they also damaged the jeep severely. They had to be rescued and this brought severe financial hit to all of them. As it is said that it is better to be safe than sorry.
Concluding the above discussion, I would say that tourism is a wonderful with a lot of benefits and a few disadvantages due to some ignorance. I highly recommend visiting areas with challenging environement or circumstances but with proper preparations and precautions, it brings self confidence, sense of accomplishment and it makes you humble, frienldy and stronger both mantally and physically.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Nowadays
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Suggestion: Moreover,
...also be a demotivating factor for them. Moreover visiting such difficult condition can a...
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...ht severe financial hit to all of them. As it is said that it is better to be safe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, similarly, so, then, well, as to, for instance, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 24.0651302605 220% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2144.0 1615.20841683 133% => OK
No of words: 439.0 315.596192385 139% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88382687927 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57737117129 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84672976621 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 235.0 176.041082164 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535307517084 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 667.8 506.74238477 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 5.43587174349 239% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.8870561682 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.4545454545 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9545454545 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.22727272727 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 8.67935871743 196% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211168447292 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.052606418898 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0595030243217 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102587396775 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0452321593008 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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