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It is important to know about events happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life.
In fact, life of most people in world is depended to others' one; it is no matter that who is he/she. However, some people think knowing about what takes place around the world has not decisive effect on our lief, but I do not think so. I claim that quality and quantity of our life is related to each other through the world and it is advisable that we have enough information of our environment. I feel this way for 3 main reasons which I will explore them in the following essay.
First of all, expanding a disease is very terrific and if we do not control it, it would result to a terrible disaster. For instance, last year when I founded about Kongo fever illness in television and social media took place in a small city in china, I could not imagine how it may spread to my country during only one week! All people in my city began to acquire information for encountering with it and after 2 mounts, the disease became controllable. Had not people be familiar with the ways which it can propagate and how they can ground breaking and dealing with it, they would have gotten sick now! As a result, it is necessary that we get certain of news through the world.
In addition, some kind of problems happened in world need to cooperation of all earth individuals. For example, shortage of food and energy, water and air pollution are global concerns, we as a part of world society must do our best not only for discovering their causes, but also finding a solution for managing such involved situations. By developing technology and being in hand last version of information in most part of the world, no one can say it is not my duty!
Last but not least, our humanity forces us to react to emergencies. Consider, happening an unexpected event like as a great earth quick or inundation in a place that is very far from us; in spite of its distance, we endeavor to help people whom are in such conditions. There are many charitable organizations for helping to peasants, people with certain disabilities, kids, etc.
In all, what drive someone to assert that we should not be unaware from around world, may fall in to 3 basic categories including danger of an epidemic illness, global concern and our moral tasks for helping to other humans. Furthermore, if we know more about surrounding events, we could be more efficient!
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, so, for example, for instance, i feel, in addition, in fact, kind of, as a result, first of all, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1932.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 418.0 407.700716846 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62200956938 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52162009685 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60801213487 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 234.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55980861244 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 600.3 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.1344086022 144% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.2255890546 48.9658058833 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.0 100.406767564 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.8571428571 20.6045352989 145% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2142857143 5.45110844103 206% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135275664944 0.236089414692 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0489858815811 0.076458572812 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0337931248502 0.0737576698707 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0750507251913 0.150856017488 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0393668486902 0.0645574589148 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 11.7677419355 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.96 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 10.1575268817 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.11 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 86.8835125448 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.0537634409 135% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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