The ability to maintain friendships with a small number of people over a long period of time is more important for happiness than the ability to make many new friends easily.
Recent years, there has been a drastic discussion about whether the ability to maintain friendships with a small number of people over a long period of time is more important for happiness than the ability to make new friends easily. From personal perspective, I strongly believe that the ability to make many new friends easily is more vital for happiness than the ability to maintain friendships with a small number of people over a long period of time. My arguments are listed as follows.
First of all, being able to establish relationships with some new friends easily helps people to get job promotion. people with this ability tend to be easy-going and can take care of everyone's feelings. therefore, when they are at work, especially when they are doing group projects, they can greatly modulate working atmosphere, leading to a more pleasant working environment. thus, the work efficiency can also be improved. Under the background that group work tends to be globally popular, it is vital for companies to find employees who can engage in group activities well. So, employers will definitely want to hire or even empower people who could not only participate in group work, but also help improve overall efficiency. With more money and higher social status, people have more choices to relax themselves like traveling to different countries and appreciating beautiful landscapes, making people more pleasant.
Second, people who have the capacity of making a lot of new friends easily are more likely to expand their life experience. To be more specific, if people can make new friends easily, by chatting with those friends, people can know different cultures, different lifestyles and some interesting personal anecdotes, which could greatly broaden their outlook. thus, they are more likely to find the way they are most comfortable living with. However, as for people who have the capacity to maintain friendships with a small number of people over a long period of time, their field of vision tend to be limited. According to research, people tend to have deep friendships with the like-minded, which means the aspect of topic they discuss is confined. therefore, they have few opportunity to know other life experience, which means they themselves cut the possibility of finding more suitable lifestyles.
To sum up, the conclusion can be easily drawn that it is more essential for joy to have the ability of making lots of new friends easily than to have the ability of maintaining friendships with a small number of people over a long period of time.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, second, so, therefore, thus, well, as for, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 43.0788530466 51% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 52.1666666667 127% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2155.0 1977.66487455 109% => OK
No of words: 423.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09456264775 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53508145475 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69933297605 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.475177304965 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 671.4 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.9235492487 48.9658058833 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.764705882 100.406767564 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8823529412 20.6045352989 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.05882352941 5.45110844103 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.5376344086 271% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.539391800341 0.236089414692 228% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.192764091641 0.076458572812 252% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.23790748421 0.0737576698707 323% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.441432603296 0.150856017488 293% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.261110602835 0.0645574589148 404% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 11.7677419355 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 58.1214874552 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 10.9000537634 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 86.8835125448 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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