Advances in transportation and communication like the airplane and the telephone have changed the way that nations interact with each other in a global society. Choose another technological innovation that you think is important. Give specific reasons for your choice.
Advancement in transportation and communication has bridged the gap between many sectors through which different countries can help each other. Other technological innovation I feel is important is in the sector of computer. High computation power and large availability of data has changed the mindset of people related to computer and machine. In the past, it was very difficult to even imagine that machines will be able to process image or predict the outcome of any particular situation. I have many such reasons due to which I feel that innovation in computation power can have great impact on society.
First of all, a computer is now able to assist humans in predicting whether or calculating the profit of a company based on company history. The insights that a computer can gain with the help of high computation power and efficient algorithm has bolstered the decision-making process. Due to these technological advancements, some people fear that machine can replace humans in any sector of industry. We all have heard that industry is moving towards automation is this could only be possible when machine can make decision on their own and without human intervention.
Furthermore, advancement in computation power has not helped the machine to do their job on their own but also scientists who demand fast and complex calculations. Many scientific centre around the world use supercomputer to find answer to their problems or carry out the task which cannot be performed with the help of normal desktop. Due to this reason scientist are now able to increase the pace at which they can innovate new technology.
Additionally, the price at which we can make use of this innovation has drastically decreased due to which academic institutions are able to explain the advantages by making students interact with the technology. So, in my opinion, I feel that increase in computation power has greatly impacted each and every sector
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- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? A zoo has no useful purpose. Use specific reasons and examples to explain your answer. 60
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, so, i feel, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 43.0788530466 53% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1640.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 317.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17350157729 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01974646815 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552050473186 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 522.0 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.9192735556 48.9658058833 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.142857143 100.406767564 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6428571429 20.6045352989 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.28571428571 5.45110844103 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121423289763 0.236089414692 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0490507148147 0.076458572812 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0473239920381 0.0737576698707 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0790913424242 0.150856017488 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0535759811674 0.0645574589148 83% => OK
automated_readability_index: 14.2 11.7677419355 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 10.9000537634 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 86.8835125448 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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