Advances in transportation and communication like the airplane and the telephone have changed the way that nations interact with each other in a global society. Choose another technological innovation that you think is important. Give specific reasons for your choice.
There are various tangible innovations that have broought the human life in to more intracions. But in my opinion the paramount of them is the internet. In past only the first centery countries which held the power of the planet and nations were in thouch with the internet but nowadays it has become more epidemic for people around the golbe to have access to it. Approaching the scheme of internet provided us with several essential and obligatoriy applications that i'm going to argue about two of them.
Science improves every day but before the manifestation of the internet the inventions got popular and spreaded out throw the newspapers and even people in a same country didn't get to inform about it. These days you simply need to get yourself near a computer or even a phone and have access to all the news, information and shared medias all around the globe. So we can say that it is the matter of implifying education and ceasing the illitracy that people from perivious eras had tendency to.
Other benefit that we can mention about the internet is carness of the public minds. Before this it was easy for politicions to lie and determine people from knowing about the truth, it was only gossip! In this era just a single pres of the "upload" can spread out the data in a unreachable speed and get the attention of myraid of humans. Internet is way of advocating from human rights and makeing the attendes of the malevolents fruitless. Say when we hear about obscure news the first repercussion is to seach about it on the internet. Extrapolaiting from this and the former mentioned reason we can conclude that the presence of the internet is too perceptive and as much as forseeable it's conducting the humanisim to achive more of the technology everyday.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...apers and even people in a same country didnt get to inform about it. These days you ...
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Line 3, column 230, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'pre'?
Suggestion: pre
... only gossip! In this era just a single pres of the 'upload' can spread ou...
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Line 3, column 288, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...upload' can spread out the data in a unreachable speed and get the attention...
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Line 3, column 764, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...anisim to achive more of the technology everyday.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, as for, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1471.0 1977.66487455 74% => OK
No of words: 308.0 407.700716846 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77597402597 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73843379492 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558441558442 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 618.680645161 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.0221174708 48.9658058833 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.583333333 100.406767564 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6666666667 20.6045352989 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.41666666667 5.45110844103 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0755254189508 0.236089414692 32% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0287091188932 0.076458572812 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0269455029314 0.0737576698707 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0521868289125 0.150856017488 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0277448470609 0.0645574589148 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 11.7677419355 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 58.1214874552 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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