Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people.
There are certain considerations or factors that everyone takes into account in a
relationship. People may look for honesty, altruism, understanding, loyalty, being
thoughtful etc! Everyone would more or less wish that the person s/he is dealing
with, has some of these virtues above. Putting them in an order according to their
importance, however can be very subjective and relative.
When someone asks him/herself the question "What do I consider to be the
most important thing in my relationship?" the answer depends on a lot of factors
such as how his/her earlier relationships were.
After stating that everyone's opinion can be different about this, for me honesty,
in other words, always telling the truth is the most important consideration
in a relationship. Opposite of this is inarguably lying and if someone needs to lie,
either s/he is hiding something or is afraid of telling me something.
In any relationship of mine, I would wish that first of all, the person I'm dealing
with is honest. Even though s/he thinks that s/he did something wrong that I
wouldn't like, s/he'd better tell me the truth and not lie about it. Later on if I find out
about a lie or hear the truth from someone else, that'd be much more unpleasant. In
that case how can I ever believe or trust that person again? How can I ever believe
that this person has enough confidence in me to forgive him/her and carry on with
the relationship from there. So if I cannot trust a person anymore, if the person
doesn't think I can handle the truth, there's no point to continuing that relationship.
Although I would like to see altruistic, understanding, thoughtful and loyal
behavior from people, an instance of_ the opposite of these behaviors would not
upset me as much as dishonesty would. Among all the possible behaviors, dishonesty
is the only one for me that terminates how I feel about a person's reliability.
Therefore honesty would be my first concern and the most important consideration
in a relationship.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, look, may, so, therefore, i feel, such as, first of all, in other words, more or less
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1709.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 339.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0412979351 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98974500504 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545722713864 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 618.680645161 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.94265232975 223% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.7801654164 48.9658058833 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.933333333 100.406767564 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6 20.6045352989 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.45110844103 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 25.0 4.53405017921 551% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244119098122 0.236089414692 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.082647059121 0.076458572812 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0914261969225 0.0737576698707 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0653441066019 0.150856017488 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105225647418 0.0645574589148 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.