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As technology develops and ideas about business change, there are many different opinions about whether spending a lot of money on advertising should be mandatory for companies. Personally, I believe that these days companies need to use advertising to introduce their products to the customers, and that leads to earn a lot of profits. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, advertising is a great way for companies to introduce their products to the customers. It is true that high-quality products could find their way in the markets all around the world, but people are more willing to buy products that have already heard about them. The advertising could help the businessman to sell their products easily by providing more appealing advertising. For this reason, the professional businessman could spend an enormous amount of money to make perfect advertising, which helps them to attract more customers. The famous actors, singers, and other characters that individuals are interested in could be used in advertising. Therefore, this leads to maintain the confidence of the customers about products. As a result, they try to have products that are bought by the famous persons.
Secondly, frequent advertising could act as a reminder for individuals to encourage them to buy some products. These days, there is keen competition among businesses. In order to have a successful business, the businessman should know about new and modern methods to attract customers and generate sales. Smaller businesses would be forced out of business easily if they do not pay enough money for advertising. Broadcasting advertising has been an effective method to remind individuals about products. For example, some products are shown on big and impressive billboards along busy roads and highways. In addition, various Medias like television, radio, websites, newspapers, and so on could advertise products and services. When shopping, people will perhaps have a great tendency to buy the products that have already heard the names or saw images of them in appealing advertising. Not only that, but when watching advertising the consumers remember that they need special products, and immediately will buy them.
In conclusion, appealing advertising is enormously beneficial for businesses, which helps them increase their sales. Advertising could use famous persons to attract people to buy products quickly. Frequent advertising works as a reminder for people to remind them they need what. As well as, customers are more willing to buy products that have already saw or heard about that.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 67, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT
Message: Use simply 'many'.
... ideas about business change, there are many different opinions about whether spending a lot o...
Line 7, column 354, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'sawed', 'sawn', 'seen'.
Suggestion: sawed; sawn; seen
...lling to buy products that have already saw or heard about that.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for example, i feel, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, first of all, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2235.0 1977.66487455 113% => OK
No of words: 417.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35971223022 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5189133491 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91401148672 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.479616306954 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 676.8 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.1199915071 48.9658058833 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.1739130435 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1304347826 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.65217391304 5.45110844103 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 11.8709677419 160% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225518161287 0.236089414692 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0691561922273 0.076458572812 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0640124965826 0.0737576698707 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164071012603 0.150856017488 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.04662985212 0.0645574589148 72% => OK
automated_readability_index: 12.9 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.51 10.9000537634 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 86.8835125448 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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