Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Teachers were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they are nowadays Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer

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Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Teachers were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they are nowadays.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Thorough the years, education has been playing an important role in every individual's life in which the success of community is perpetuated with this vital element. To fulfill such a requirement, it is necessary to provide a situation which teachers are appreciated by society. There has been a heated controversy whether nowadays teachers are more valued and praised by community than from the past or not. I for one subscribe to the idea that since government provides an appropriate environment for teachers and parents become aware about the special status of teachers, they have a highly respected position in the society. In the following paragraph, I will delve into some conspicuous aspects which persuade me to put forward in this perspective.

The foremost reason coming to my mind at first is that nowadays government have invested significant portion of money in education to provide an appropriate condition for training children. To put it to another word, besides updating materials of study and building modern classes, it is necessary to improve the social status of teachers in the community by paying them well and preparing special benefits. In this way, teachers have been encouraged to do their duty effectively. For instance, the income of teachers in my country has been increased five time more than ten years ago. As a result, more and more young people are convinced to choose teacher as their future career. In addition, teacher’s day is a very important day in my society in which teachers are commemorated by people.

Furthermore, there is another reason which deserves some words here. With the increasing rate of literacy in society, more and more people are pursuing their education in higher level. Consequently, parents are getting well-educated. With this intention, they become more aware about the importance of teachers in their children's upbringing. Take my experience as an example, in contrast to my parent’s generation, I as a mother have a stronger relation with my children's teachers. We have regular meeting to discuss about the barriers and problems of my children and provide better solution to solve them. In fact, their perspectives about improvement of my children’s life are very important to me and I try to put them into practice.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 75, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
...been playing an important role in every individuals life in which the success of community ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, consequently, first, furthermore, if, so, well, for instance, in addition, in contrast, in fact, as a result, in contrast to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.0752688172 260% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1928.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 371.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19676549865 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38877662729 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94527896106 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.522911051213 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 616.5 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.5170908073 48.9658058833 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.111111111 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6111111111 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.38888888889 5.45110844103 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157150382497 0.236089414692 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0548870602392 0.076458572812 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0469264509605 0.0737576698707 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11351898077 0.150856017488 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0254839016526 0.0645574589148 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 11.7677419355 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 58.1214874552 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 10.9000537634 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 86.8835125448 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 10.002688172 150% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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