Because people are busy doing so many different things, they do very few things well. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In today’s hectic life, all individuals are forced to handle so many tasks simultaneously. From time to time, they cannot perfect the jobs as they ought to. In this regard, tasks will remain unfinished by doing everything and anything, or people would do them just for the sake of doing it, not because they sincerely like them. I embrace the view of performing with rush affect the outcome to a great extent, and I will explore my reasons in the following paragraphs.
First, when no passion and love are involved in doing things, no significant result will come out. To perform a task with a high level of perfection, one is required to put all of his heart and soul into it without worrying about the overburden of workload and a close deadline. It goes without saying that in the modern era, we are facing a world where human beings are always in a rush to get somewhere and do something; therefore, the love and passion in this equation lost their meaning. In this way, people might do so many things at once, but they do not care about the final result, which brings them success and fortune but not the happiness they are seeking. A personal example can drive this notion home. I was assigned with a work project years ago, which was beyond my responsibilities, and the due date was in one week, and I had tons of other responsibilities that I had to take care of. Thus, I eventually handed out the final report, but I knew I could do better. I believe that my workload and time adversely influence the result on my part.
Secondly, juggling diverse tasks on a regular basis can do harm to mental and physical health. To be more specific, the pressure that society puts on every individual to do things quickly is in direct correlation with the alarming increase of diseases. The human being body cannot perform under tension for so long, and if it does so, it will take its toll on its organs. Consequently, nor the person performing the task is satisfied, nor the society in which he works and lives. It is a collective decision for people to avoid this routine for themselves and the world. For instance, in Japan, reports have shown that many people burn out and die since they spend doing things simultaneously. This phenomenon should be addressed before it becomes a worldwide complication.
To conclude, not only will conducting many tasks bring no joy along the way for the person in charge of them, but it can also damage one’s mind and body. Lack of these qualities will reflect in failures.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 231, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...and soul into it without worrying about the overburden of workload and a close deadline. It go...
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Line 7, column 28, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'conduct'
Suggestion: conduct
...ication. To conclude, not only will conducting many tasks bring no joy along the way f...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, for instance, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 13.8261648746 174% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2075.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 447.0 407.700716846 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64205816555 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.59808378696 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63338425806 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 251.0 212.727598566 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561521252796 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 643.5 618.680645161 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 10.0 1.86738351254 536% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.1538707674 48.9658058833 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.8095238095 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2857142857 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.04761904762 5.45110844103 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.85842293907 285% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227316023118 0.236089414692 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0621122290475 0.076458572812 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0737446204959 0.0737576698707 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132568724051 0.150856017488 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0669922801711 0.0645574589148 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 86.8835125448 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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