Because the world is changing so quickly, people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past.
Nowadays, the quick changing of the world has gotten impressive impacts on all aspects of life such as jobs, communications even salaries. Regarding this fact, there is a controversial question asking whether these developments make people upset or not. I am afraid, I disagree with the opinion which is expressing the lack of happiness and satisfaction for the humans of the new era. The reasons to substantiate my idea are explored in the following.
First of all, new evolution include new technology which makes the tasks of people easier than before. To put on the other hand, the persons of the past had to spend a lot of time to do some hard duties that intensify the sense of tired and make the people unsatisfied. However, today everyone does not have to waste time on hard jobs and this event is an interesting happening. As an illustration, I am going to speak about my grandfather who used to work in farmland. He had been serving there for several years until his wife passed away because of cancer. My grandfather told me “I am so sorry, I could not pass enough time with her; I had to work every day for my family”. My grandfather felt sorry neither for not being kind nor for having bad behavior, rather, that was due to do not have enough time because of hard lives in the past.
Second, the variations in the new world and former have influenced not only be comfortable but also the relationship. To be specific, making relationships with the help of technology is a wonderful event for new individuals. It is crystal clear, our grandparents could have relationships with the people of their zone or their city, but now all of us have the chance to know everyone all over the world. These differences between the present and yesterday indicate the positive results which have to consider. A personal experience of mine can drive this fact home, my father has worked for a great company for four years, some years ago, while he was preparing to quit his job because of financial issue, he got familiar with LinkedIn, afterward, he put his resume on his page and later he could find a better job in another country. The social network strongly aided him in obtaining his new career that was at his research interest. If my father had lived in the past, he would not an opportunity to find a better job in another county.
By and large, I do believe the alternation in the new world is a great event for new people. Since these shifts let them have an easier life which did not happen before and spending more time with their family which prepares love. Also, it has much effects on having a relationship with people who live all over the world.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 245, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...amily which prepares love. Also, it has much effects on having a relationship with p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, regarding, second, so, while, such as, by and large, first of all, i am afraid, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 52.1666666667 125% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2202.0 1977.66487455 111% => OK
No of words: 475.0 407.700716846 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63578947368 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.66845742379 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66132743418 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 256.0 212.727598566 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538947368421 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 695.7 618.680645161 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 19.0 9.59856630824 198% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.1220876226 48.9658058833 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.857142857 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.619047619 20.6045352989 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.09523809524 5.45110844103 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170310813229 0.236089414692 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0511369194733 0.076458572812 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.048659827254 0.0737576698707 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113363001597 0.150856017488 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0127325582073 0.0645574589148 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.93 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 86.8835125448 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 81.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.5 Out of 30
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