A company has announced that it wishes to build a large factory near your community. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this new influence on your community. Do you support or oppose the factory?
Building a large factory has advantages and disadvantages for a nearby community. However, I think its advantages are more than its disadvantages. I will compare the advantages against its disadvantages in the following paragraphs.
Firstly, a large factory will create jobs for the nearby community. These jobs would be directly related to the factory and indirectly. The factory needs human resources that can recruit from the nearby community. It is for the benefit of the community and the factory. The community members will find a job and earn money to afford their personal and family expenses, and the factory does not pay for the transportation of the workers who are recruited from the nearby community. If the factory recruits the workers from communities far from the factory location, it should pay for the transportation of the workers. Or the workers should pay themselves that affect their willingness and also their requests for higher salaries to compensate the transportation. However, if the workers’ homes are close to the factory, they will not need transportation or pay less than those who come from far locations.
Secondly, the factory will create indirect jobs for the community as well. It includes transportation of the goods and materials that the factory needs and also other daily needs. The local people and community can have a role in supplying these materials or they would have a role in its transportation.
Thirdly, it will have paved the way for development of the community. It needs roads, electricity etc., that the community will benefit from.
On the other hand, it would have disadvantages too. Air pollution, pollutions of the areas by the factory wastes are the disadvantages that the factory brings with itself to the community. Even through, the government and the environment policies can reduce this disadvantage, but it would remain as an issue. For example, a factory that produces goods that is produced from chemical materials the wastes usually spread the areas and disposed in the nearby areas. This would result in diseases. Air pollution is one of the major problem around the world that resulted from the factories.
In conclusion, building a factory in a nearby area has advantages for the community and disadvantages. The advantages, however, are more than disadvantages. It will create direct and indirect jobs for the people live in a community, and paved the way for development of the community. Also disadvantages like air pollution and pollution of the environment that brings about diseases.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, well, for example, i think, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 9.8082437276 194% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2185.0 1977.66487455 110% => OK
No of words: 413.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29055690073 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50803742585 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05752564753 2.67179642975 114% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.401937046005 0.524837075471 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 677.7 618.680645161 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 8.0 3.08781362007 259% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.1508988013 48.9658058833 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.0384615385 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8846153846 20.6045352989 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.30769230769 5.45110844103 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.85842293907 285% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202944397238 0.236089414692 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0750714125363 0.076458572812 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0854248120567 0.0737576698707 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123002917011 0.150856017488 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0565492419404 0.0645574589148 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 11.7677419355 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 10.9000537634 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 86.8835125448 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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