Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The ability to maintain friendships with a small number of people over a long period of time is more important for happiness than the ability to make many new friends easily.
In this sophisticated world that we live in, friendships play an important role in every human beings' life because humans are social creatures and need to have some friends. there is a controversial argument among people who believe that it is better to have a long relationship with clique than have a huge number of people as friends. I am of the opinion that it is correct. it remains to elaborate some merits of this perspective in detail.
First and foremost, old friends are more reliable. being in the trenches, people try to find a person to ask some help from his or her. If people do not know each other well, they will not rely on each other. For example, when I have attended Tehran University, I found many new friends in there. One day, I encountered some financial problems and asked them to lend me some money but, none of them did this. Strange although it may seem, I asked an old friend not have seen for a long period of time and he lent me some money. Hence, when people have some old friends, they do not become despondent when they face problems and they can rely on old friends forever.
Added to this, old friends know each other better. having in common hobbies, interests or even impetus, human beings consume their times happily with each other. there is no need to spend lots of time to understand each other. For instance, I had a birthday party when I was 20 years old. I invited some of my old friends alongside some of my new friends to that party. my old friends brought me better gifts because they had known my favorites while others brought some not impertinent gifts.
having mentioned two benefits of keeping old friends, I can draw the conclusion that old friendships make our life happier than a huge number of short term friendships. it is imperative that humans maintain their old friendships instead of making a lot of superficial relations with new people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, if, may, so, well, while, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1567.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 340.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60882352941 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50207353455 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547058823529 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 618.680645161 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.4884306857 48.9658058833 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.4736842105 100.406767564 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8947368421 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.68421052632 5.45110844103 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178805153474 0.236089414692 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0590560486021 0.076458572812 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0480724115089 0.0737576698707 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116602592944 0.150856017488 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0247604491255 0.0645574589148 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 11.7677419355 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.16 10.9000537634 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.31 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 86.8835125448 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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