Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The ability to maintain friendships with a small number of people over a long period of time is more important for happiness than the ability to make many new friends easily. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
The relations between people have a tremendous impact on humans' life. These relations could impact on individuals in many realms. From my vantag point, I believe that the friendships for a long period has a planty benefits for indvidual for the following reasons.
To begin with, Long span friendships could help us to have enjoy time. Old mates know every thing about us. For instance, Before many days, my friend, since high school, invited me to launch. He cooked what I like and brought my faviorate film to have a fun time. He did not prepare anything could hurt my health because he knew I had high blood sugar and blood pressure. He knew every things about me and prevent these things when I visit him. On the other word, last week, my new co-worker asked me to visit him in his resident. He made a salty food. As a result, I could not eat because that will have a deleterious impact on my health.
In addition, old friends could help us in urgent situations. We could depend on them, when we need. For example, one year ago, I had financial problem because I lost my job. Thus, I had car accident at the same time and my hands break. My friend, Ali, Help me to pass in this emergansy. He borrowed me money, repaired my car and paid my rent. He assist me to stand on feet again. Without him I could not survive in this life. However, I called one of new friend and told him what happened to me. He just came and brought flowers for me. he never asked me, if I need any help. Consequently, long duration buddies could help us in a hard cases.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'humans'' or 'human's'?
Suggestion: humans'; human's
...ween people have a tremendous impact on humans life. These relations could impact on ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ns life. These relations could impact on individuals in many realms. From my vant...
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Message: Use past participle here: 'enjoyed'.
Suggestion: enjoyed
... span friendships could help us to have enjoy time. Old mates know every thing about ...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ad high blood sugar and blood pressure. He knew every things about me and prevent ...
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Message: The pronoun 'He' must be used with a third-person verb: 'assists'.
Suggestion: assists
...y, repaired my car and paid my rent. He assist me to stand on feet again. Without him ...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'case'?
Suggestion: case
...uration buddies could help us in a hard cases.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, however, if, so, thus, for example, for instance, in addition, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 0.0 15.1003584229 0% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 58.0 43.0788530466 135% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 52.1666666667 61% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1275.0 1977.66487455 64% => OK
No of words: 290.0 407.700716846 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.39655172414 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33751649259 2.67179642975 87% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565517241379 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 386.1 618.680645161 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.59856630824 188% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.1344086022 60% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.3224861668 48.9658058833 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 53.125 100.406767564 53% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.0833333333 20.6045352989 59% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 4.29166666667 5.45110844103 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0957336643812 0.236089414692 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0298430640352 0.076458572812 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0409530408835 0.0737576698707 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0838152146825 0.150856017488 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0374979273203 0.0645574589148 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.3 11.7677419355 45% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 84.68 58.1214874552 146% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.4 10.1575268817 43% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.35 10.9000537634 67% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.9 8.01818996416 86% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 86.8835125448 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.0537634409 68% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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